DAVID vs GOLIATH

[V.I.P.]

REPLIED ON THESE FOLLOWIN THREADS. CHECK OUT NOK'D ESPECIALLY. FEELIN THEM ALL.

METHODZ:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...234#post973234

MASTA C:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...236#post973236

NOK’D VIZION:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...light=GAZANOVA


DAVID vs GOLIATH


VERSE ONE
IVE BEEN BEEFIN ON THE NET RECENTLY BUT THIS RAPS CUMIN FROM THE HEART/
IM GONNA TELL IT HOW LIFE IS ROUND MANCHESTER TO THE END FROM THE START/
IM WRITIN THIS IN COLLEGE WHILE GETTING SCHOLARS AND GETTING PAID/
MEANWHILE ONE OF MY OLD BOYS IS GETTING CONCLUDED WITH A BLADE/
HE GOT STABBED IN THE HEART FOR NOT PAYIN FOR £10 TICK ON SKUNK/
SO THE DEALER DECIDED THAT WAS A GOOD REASON TO KILL – WOT A PUNK/
WE ALL KNEW THE MURDER, HE WAS MY OLD BEST MATE FROM HIGH SKOOL/
I FUCKED HIM OFF A COUPLE OF YEAR AGO, HE STARTED ACTIN THE FOOL/
IF THERE IS ONE, THE FUNNY THING IS THAT IT HAPPENED ON 9/11
I AINT RELIGIOUS BUT GOD I HOPE THAT GUYS IN HEAVEN/
YOU KNOW, WHILE IM SAT HERE IN COLLEGE I COULD ALSO GET KILLED/
COZ THAT’S WHERE HER WAS, LEARNIN TO BECOME A BUILD-/
HER, HIM, ANY OF THESE PRICKS CUD KILL ME IF I SLACK FOR A SECOND/
BUT THEY'D END UP IN THE PEN, WUD THERE MOTIVES BE QUESTIONED?/
WAS IT OVER DRUGS, LAUGHS OR JUST FOR FUCKIN THEIR HOES?/
NO USE ASKIN ANYONE BUT THE FUCKIN KILLER, ONLY HE KNOWS/
I GOT BEEF AGAINST THE WORLD COZ THERES THINGS ‘N’ PEOPLE I’VE LOST/
TO REWIND TIME N DEAL WITH SHIT BETTER – HOW MUCH WUD IT COST?/
I WISH I CUD AV ANOTHER CHANCE OF PLAYIN LIFE DIFFERENTLY/
THE ONLY THING I ACHIEVED IS STAYIN OUT OF THE PENETENTARY/
JUST LIKE PAC I SEE NO CHANGES AND ITS ME AGAINST THE WORLD/
BUT UNLIKE BIGGIE I THINK MORE MONEY MORE PROBLEMS IS OBSERD/


CHORUS

SO IT’S ME AGAINST THIS JUNGLE/
AND ITS ME WHO’S GOTTA TRIUMPH/
IM LIVIN THIS FUCKIN STRUGGLE/
ITS DAVID VERSUS GOLIATH/

SO IT’S ME AGAINST THIS JUNGLE/
AND ITS ME WHO’S GOTTA TRIUMPH/
IM LIVIN THIS FUCKIN STRUGGLE/
ITS DAVID VERSUS GOLIATH/

VERSE TWO
SO ITS ME AGAINST THE WORLD, DAVID AGAINST GOLIATH/
AND AGAIN THE SMALLER FORCE IS GOIN TO TRIUMPH/
COZ I WONT LET THIS PLACE GET ME DOWN, ILL JUST DRINK HEAVILY/
AT THE END OF THE NITE - FALL INTO MY HOUSE, CAUSE STRESS MY FAMILY/
THAT’S OK THO COZ MY STEP DADDYS ALREADY DUN THAT/
FUCKED OFF LAST CHRISTMAS, LEFT NO MONEY, ACTIN THE TWAT/
AND NOW HE GOT A NEW WOMAN, ANOTHER SLAG TO SHAG IN HIS LIFE/
SO HE CAME ROUND TO TELL MY MOMMA AND CAUSE MORE STRIFE/
SHE'S THE SISTER OF A WOMAN WHO HAD AN AFFAIR WITH MY BIRTH FATHER/
HE DIED WHEN I WAS 1, HEART ATTACK, BUT THERES NO OTHER WAY I’D RATHER/
HAVE MY LIFE COZ I GOT MY MOM, BROTHER N SISTER OUT OF IT/
SOME PEOPLE WANNA DIE BUT COZ OF FAMILY I WANT THE OPPOSITE/
ME AND MY BROTHER ARE TIGHT LIKE STARSKY AND HUTCH/
WE SLING AND PARTY A LOT, NEVER BEEF TOO MUCH/
HE NEARLY DIED FROM CRUPE WHEN I WAS NEARLY THREE/
NOW WHENEVER I’M IN TROUBLE, HE BE THERE FOR ME/
MY MOM WAS BORN WITH 1 KIDNEY AND IT GOT INFECTED/
2 THIRDS HAD TO BE DETATCHED WHEN A SIST WAS DETECTED/
MY SISTER AINT MY FULL, ONLY HALF FROM MY MOMS SIDE/
BUT SHE MIGHT AS WELL BE, THAT’S HOW IT FEEL INSIDE/
SHE AS CUTE AS CAN, WANTS TO BE A DANCING STAR/
AND LIKE THE SUN, I KNOW SHE GONNA BE THE BIGGEST BY FAR/

CHORUS

SO IT’S ME AGAINST THIS JUNGLE/
AND ITS ME WHO’S GOTTA TRIUMPH/
IM LIVIN THIS FUCKIN STRUGGLE/
ITS DAVID VERSUS GOLIATH/

SO IT’S ME AGAINST THIS JUNGLE/
AND ITS ME WHO’S GOTTA TRIUMPH/
IM LIVIN THIS FUCKIN STRUGGLE/
ITS DAVID VERSUS GOLIATH/

VERSE THREE

FUCK SITTIN BACK ON LIFE,CUM OUT ALL GUNS BLAZIN/
COZ I CAN’T BE TO SYNICAL ABOUT MY RAISIN/
MY MAMMAS BEEN LIKE A PILLAR, THERE AS MY SUPPORT/
WHEN I WAS PLAYIN UP AT SKOOL N GOT PUT ON REPORT/
AND WHEN I GOT SUSPENDED FOR FIGHTIN IN THE HALLWAY/
SHE SHOWN ME THE LIGHT HOPING THAT I WOULDN’T GO ASTRAY/
ITS TOO LATE FOR THAT COZ I ALREADY FUCKED UP IN COLLEGE/
FAILED LAST YEAR, GOTTA STAY ANDEXPAND MY KNOWLEDGE/
IM JUST CHILLIN HERE, WRITIN LYRICS WITH MY HOMMIES AND THE GIRLS/
BUT MY HEAD IS SPININ AND I CANT THINK OF ANY WORDS FOR THIS VERSE/
COZ MY MINDS GOIN CLOUDY AND NOTHINGS REALLY CLEAR/
WHATS GOIN ON IN MY MIND AINT WHAT I SHOW ON THE EXTER-IOR/
COZ I GOTTA KEEP MY HEAD UP N KEEP MY MIND SAIN/
SO MY LIL’ SIS FINKS EVERYFINS OK – SHE DON’T NEED NO PAIN/
NEITHER DO I, INFACT, NON OF Y’ALL MUTHA FUCKERS NEED IT/
SO WHY DON’T WE STOP MERCYLESS KILLINGS – AND JUST FUCKIN LEAVE IT/
AND IM SICK OF SEEIN TEENAGE BEAUTIES GETTING LEFT WITH KIDS/
USE A FUCKIN JOONY, GET AN ABORTION OR JUST FLICK UR OWN CLITS/
JUST DON’T GO HAVIN SEX, HAVIN KIDS AND GIVIN THEM A SHIT TIME/
EVERY NIGHT, TUCK EM IN BED, READ THEM A LIL’ STORY AND SING EM A RHYME/
SO IM GONNA SPIT U 1 LAST LINE TO THINK ABOUT LIFE/
CHILL, RELAX, AV PEACE AND STOP LIVIN BY THE GUN N KNIFE/


CHORUS

SO IT’S ME AGAINST THIS JUNGLE/
AND ITS ME WHO’S GOTTA TRIUMPH/
IM LIVIN THIS FUCKIN STRUGGLE/
ITS DAVID VERSUS GOLIATH/

SO IT’S ME AGAINST THIS JUNGLE/
AND ITS ME WHO’S GOTTA TRIUMPH/
IM LIVIN THIS FUCKIN STRUGGLE/
ITS DAVID VERSUS GOLIATH/

[pedro nok]

Liked this piece mate.....kno what ya been goin thru n wots happened so I kno the story behind it etc

[80SHOTS]

dayme this was tight, wordplay could do with a lil fixing up, but it was cool. rhymes ok, flow was word, apart from that it was worth reading!

[the_insane_clown]

Fuck yeah! Fuck yeah! finally real fuckin mc on dis fuckin site!

[Baron Mynd]

^ Moron.

Well ..

.. i seriously don't know where to start on this, i read through
it and my attention was wandering before half way if im honest = /
The flow to me seemed off by a lot, it seemed to drift away off
and on between topics .. a lot of the time the rhyming was basic, the caps lock didnt really help much - just hurt my fucking eyes to read this garbage. Wordplay was like .. non existant? Maybe its just me cause the newbies seemed to get it * shrugs* Overall i didnt like this at all. Sorry.

Elevate.

[V.I.P.]

YO, UPPIN TO GET A LITTLE MORE FEEDBACK. CHANGED THE FLOE A LITTLE TO PUT IT ONTO MUSIC SO IF U CATS GIVE ME SUM FEEDBACK I'LL RECORD THE AUDIO AND PUT IT ONLINE.

[geezy]

nice.....real nice ...I can feel what you saying homie.....
its seems real deep.....i like that ....stay real

[Dappa Rappa]

Go on Gaz Lad! Not bad i personally reckon 'My Mothers Wedding' Was better, but you cant compare yourself to me, haha. jus playin.

[Kwizikal P]

not bad gaz.....Dappa where in coll are U?

[Dappa Rappa]

Im at home, i got up late, u foned me didnt'cha?

[Kwizikal P]

yeah, gettin u bak for wakin me up the other nite ya cunt....PM me instead of ruinin gaz's thread