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Thread: oppresed by society

  1. #1
    executive
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    oppresed by society

    i just made this today mainly because i was shocked by the amount of suicides that happen daily.......




    Complicated situations align themselves to keep me down and away from sobriety/
    The reason why I’m never sober is the obstacle of life and the oppression of society/
    Depressive thoughts are constantly circling in the entrails of my head like 3d visions/
    Particles of mislead issues caused by held back emotions and unwise decisions/
    Some times I blame my problems on society and refuse to take the burden/
    Inside I’m burning, consciously turning and not able to drop a word in/
    chorus
    And oppression of society continues…..

    One more death is one less issue/
    in the depths of despair will anyone miss you?...
    think of the world and the things you have to live for….
    Consider you’re options and the fact that life is a dead end war/

    And oppression of society continues….

    Questions remain unanswered regarding my life tribulations/
    Expectations quickly became complications as I realized the lack of public relations/
    Complex virtues of neglected people have fatal consequences and end ill-fated/
    I was born hated” why was I created? Abandoned by everyone left desecrated and now pill sedated/
    I find only one remedy for this illness called existence/
    I was always kept to a distance” advised to walk the path of least resistance/
    And now I found the last part I found the way to end the pain/
    Counter the problems handed to me by ending this life of mine with shot straight to the brain/

    chorus
    And oppression of society continues…..
    One more death is one less issue/
    in the depths of despair will anyone miss you?...
    think of the world and the things you have to live for….
    Consider you’re options and the fact that life is a dead end war/
    And oppression of society continues…..

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    NONCENTZ AKA WORD~PERFECT noncentz's Avatar
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    twin you on point with yours....hit me for a collab i really can appreciate your work here and would love to see more
    to love something,is to die for it ,if you do, your a martyr , but these days music is morbid, false carters ..prohet's for prophet no lie, look how our last martyr was crucified. to put it in it symplicity, you aint true...you wouldnt sacrifice a few dollars for authenticity..

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    aight koo.....just let me know when u wanna do it and i'll be sure to come with some good stuff

  4. #4
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    upping............lets get some feed back

  5. #5
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    upping.....................................

    uppng........................................

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    yo

    i luved this piece the vocab and flow was on point
    and it kept me noddin as i could distantly hear this spitten over a beat

    lol all in all this piece was top dawg
    hope to see ore from ya and hanx for keep in it reall
    still hatin the dickriders
    and still pointin M out

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