Regular Battle
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1 bar(2lines) vs 1 bar(2lines)
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first to 4 wins
3-0 is a KO
@bare ryu @Jack Hallows
Regular Battle
Punches due NO DUE DATES
Voting ends on NO DUE DATES
.
.
1 bar(2lines) vs 1 bar(2lines)
You know the rules, if not, refer to the rule thread.
first to 4 wins
3-0 is a KO
@bare ryu @Jack Hallows
check. g/l bro
M³
james baldwin
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if u think this lame talks to bitches, its safe to say ur WAY optimistic
tried to imagine jackalope with fire birds but shit…even THAT game’s nonexistent
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Re: WK37: HMM(RD1) Jack hallows vs Bare Ryu
Originally Posted by Jack Hallows
maya angelou, langston hughes, james baldwin. all revered for their myriad wisdom
comparing u isn’t ‘cuz ur rare & mythic, it’s cuz i’ll bare ryu with ‘em
M³
Jack Hallows- Your punch was a good bit more direct. I'll say this Jack- you need to clean up your set ups and transitions. - both lacked good flow, no multis, no inner rhyme.
Bare- you had much better flow and multis throughout- I just didnt like the stretch on the punchline. But it's close because everything else was way cleaner
I have to vote Jack Hallow- I just thought his punch was better
Ryu came with bare minimum to me wasn’t terrible just lacked a lot in every category compared to jack who came stronger more personal even though the last line was a little fuzzy it still connected. Wouldn’t say either came weak at all but I gotta go Jack
I’m going with bare ryu on this one. Wasn’t a huge fan of fire birds cuz that’s a gay way to say girls.. some British shit but all jack did was use the wordplay that bare ryu already gave when making a name.. bury u.. u didn’t do nothing that was outside the box u literally just said his name (mentioning the wordplay he already provided)
VOTE RYU
Yeah Bare Ryu was great, multiple wordplay components and well put together. I agree with Miracle that Jack’s punch seemed to just be reiterating the pun which is already intended by Bare in their name.
Vote- Bare Ryu
Yeah this is an easy W for ryu his punch was nice and structured well with good word play wasn’t a fan of jacks really just listed a bunch of names then a weak flip
V/ryu
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