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Thread: Mom I'm sorry

  1. #46
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    wellll illl be day jamed

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    Originally posted by The Wang
    wellll illl be day jamed
    Try puttin a constructive comment in
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    damn dawg, i feel everyword. this is some serois shit. fo real man u got major talent

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    yo lm, nice emotional piece
    I can definitely relate to it, me and my moms can't get along neither at times and it's just some fucked up shit, but don't let it pass you by, ... you should let her read it.
    keep ya head up, and keep droppin
    dope piece man

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    Embarking darker images and skeletal remains
    Cold hearted soldier with ice in his veins

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    Thanks. Everybody seems to like this one
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    Ok piece could be executed better, wit a higher vocab , flow was ok, ...overall was decent keep droppin .. = )

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    yo pretty tight shit dawg aiight keepit flowing dawg aiight Peace (v)

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    fukkin ill rhyme dude i was feelin that shit like mad great flow to it and everythin was set in where it needed to be. I can't even give any bad feedback about that shit. It was dope as a mother fukker and the suttle yet strong emotion in it took my under man. U came at it so call and collected yet u could tell that u just wanted to scream. Great piece.

    Yo hit this up w/ an honest vote PLEASE
    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...287#post881287

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    Thanks for the comments
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    You triggered my heartstrings, I have a reputation for sensitivity an you gone an found that out without even knowing my weakness... content an dept was good but if you want an opinion based on 'RAP' and 'RAP' alone, vocab could be better...
    You knda remind me of me when I was 16 (jus turned 17) you gonna improve alot, jus keep at it...

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    Dude if you fucking up this again I will delete it. Do not respond to this post! If you respond to this post I will delete it!

    FUCK OFF!
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