1-2 Punch League
Week: 2
CHECK INS DUE TUESDAY11:59PM EASTERN
PUNCHES DUE THURSDAY 11:59PM EASTERN
VOTING ENDS SUNDAY 11:59PM EASTERN
@Packed Graves
@Smog
1-2 Punch League
Week: 2
CHECK INS DUE TUESDAY11:59PM EASTERN
PUNCHES DUE THURSDAY 11:59PM EASTERN
VOTING ENDS SUNDAY 11:59PM EASTERN
@Packed Graves
@Smog
カミノコトバ
Posting soon, sorry.
1x Best Overall Textcee(tie)
1x FL Best Text Battler
My bad I'm here
@Smog when you want to post?
1x Best Overall Textcee(tie)
1x FL Best Text Battler
Ready whenever
One swing bada bing, this punk graves may take ten,
But when I hit u it's over Packed.. Like u brought 6 outfits on a 1 day vacation..
your wife's a slut, her pussy is wetter then a rain storm
after i smash the bitch, 'best grab hurricane how im leaving the frame torn
light-work, 2ez.
1x Best Overall Textcee(tie)
1x FL Best Text Battler
Smog had a good flip on a played concept but his setup was ass. PG had a less played concept and flipped it well and transitioned it nicely.
V/packed graves
カミノコトバ
Nameflip idea's been done, I've seen a few and recently I believe GOW used something closely related. Not feelin' the whole simile used, think you could have did more w/ the idea. However, I feel your punch would have landed more effectively if your set up helped. A lot of people sleep on set up lines as well as don't use them. In most cases you see a lot of people et ups have NOTHING too do w/ the punch itself and normally just toss in filler which IMO is stupid. A weak punch can be dope/fire if set up correctly.
Slight reach but works. Seen this WP/concept used in this same fashion a few times. I think the wordin needed just a little tweakin', it was kind of rough but I got the message.
OVERALL: I got PG takin' this w/ a cleaner and more effective punch. Cool 1-2 face off, gents.
v/ Packed Graves
good battle. PG had a solid stinger. Smogs was coo but it didnt out do his opponents.
v. pg
Smogs setup definitely hurt him here. I've seen the hurricane wordplay flip done but overall it was displayed nicely.
V/Packed Graves
V.Graves/nice wordplay, couldve ended better but it was enough to win
...Onslaught!
v/ graves --- his punchline hit harder and wordplay was clever. cool punch... and smog - i think concept felt forced to me, it was a good try though, just didnt connect.
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