Yall stop freeposting specially you raptor.
Multi
yo tapper stop trippin, you aint really a rapper
couldnt drop hot shit if you were sittin on the crapper
*super played out*
in open mic, you rhyme about straps, paper and bling
in real life, youre tied to mommy's apron strings
*funny*
when youre in the ring with multi youll tap out quick
you couldnt win if you had ME ghostwrite your shit
*not a bad flip*played
i see you bartend - can i offer you a tip?
shut the fuck up and make me a drink
*zero effort here*
ill drive through five states and wreck you easy
stay in wisconsin cause your shit is cheesy
*played... even in the cyphers*
your lyrics are weak, here's some encouragement
study what i spit before your next tournament
*not bad i thought*
2.5 on punches
vs
tapper..
I know a biter when i see one, i dont want no teeth marks,
and i know that yous a pussy, cuz all i hear is queef farts,
*very forced rhyme whichmeans doesnt make sense but rhymes**queef is a fart*
Fuckin re-tard, peel you off like tree bark,
This should be a V.I.P. site, and we'd confiscate your key card,
*kinda liked this cept wordin is a little off*
like american history X, should get curb stomped on the street tar,
Yeah, now we beef hard, scrap your verse like jeep parts,
setup*veryplayed* first half of second line could have been more then a rhyme*
You beat me? better chance to marry your high school sweet heart,
you can draw a full hand and id drop your sorry ass picking up just 3 cards,
*no* you focused on one rhyme scheme though swagger it hurts you more then helps.* with punches.
Like bitch you'll never beat Hearts, My flavor like sweet tarts,
Quit tryna suck my dick and you wouldnt get those knee marks,
* wording needs work but kinda funny*
Biting like sea sharks, Multi, you should just give up the trade,
or go audition as "I wanna be a rapper like Tapper on MTVs MADE,
*uhm H to the ell to the no*
punches 2.0
Punches:M
best punch:M
structure:M
flow:M
multis:T
personals:M
V:Multi.. T you are getting better but still need fine tuning
