Where'd I Put My Compass?

[djrubiks]

You gave me your hand
As to lead me the way;
Should have crushed it in a vice grip-
I followed,
You stared ahead,
While I watched from behind.
I stumbled! Damned bourbon-

You lead me to a lovely place,
Where I puked in the bushes-
Nervous habit.
I sat to take it all in;
The utter realization of
Lost, settled-

I turned to find comfort;
But you left me there.
I thought I saw your pretty face
Taunting me through the branches, briefly-
Instead of following,
I decided to sleep off this
Epic hangover.

Fuck it!
I'll find my way back-
Eventually...

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[CALIPH80]

lmfao hahahahaha.this was raw emotion here.nice light drunk topic and you came good.short and sweet here.nothing eye opening but dope still because of its simplicity.i enjoyed this.

[djrubiks]

Thanks, ya I usually like to get something out drunk and my attention span is usually short; so after correcting the random typos I'm not left with much to work with the next morning. Glad you liked it.

[BETTER THEN U]

very short but catchy and dope as hell.i was pulled in a whirlwind by this.very nice work and nothing bad to say,
i guess my feedback wasnt good enough according to spekz so here goes.there is nothing i would want you to change about this there is nothing to add or flip around.this is dope in all aspects.it brings vivid images without overdoing it.it uses good vocabulary without making me look shit up.it is great and i think it is a perfect piece very well written.....