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    First verse on this site

    Just signed up here...looks like a good site. I haven't been on a battleboard in a few years but I used to be real active on some other ones back in the day.

    Heres a quick verse just to show my style.

    Better than me? making that type of claim is outlandish
    It just doesn't make sense like tryna say it in spanish
    I Make emcees vanish, like a magician on stage
    i'm the type of beast they only allow to spit from a cage
    but Challengers who get hype on the mic, I murder em often
    so when facin me...
    save some time by just saying your verse from a coffin
    I can take on ya whole squadron like a martial arts flick
    so my best advice for you is to not even start shit
    I can make my bars flip and the punches will still be forceful
    I been in this business for to long for me to still be remorceful
    My lyrics are a jawful, no other rapper could bare to spit em'
    cuz theres no other emcee like me who can connect the mind with rythm
    So I don't mean to be rude to you pests, but I do it the best
    Lyrically im at the top of the food chain, humans are next
    I command respect, your punchlines just can't connect
    whereas my skills always 'expand' like a man whose flexed
    I damage vets, make them look as stupid as newbs
    I don't do this sh*t for fun man I do it for food

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    Re: First verse on this site

    leave 2 links to pieces you have left feedback on.

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    i like that man my kind of style i prefer this type of shit, and is the only one ive read in a while and i like ur style too 8/10 in my opinion

    i also liked how ur lines were thoughtful and some were deep enough for me to like and it was pretty interesting throughout with consistency

    keep at it and maybe we can collab sometime

    return the favour on:
    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...html?p=6846510

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    Re: First verse on this site

    wanna battle..??

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    Re: First verse on this site

    Quote Originally Posted by Remo View Post
    wanna battle..??
    I guess lol set it up

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    ehh u set it up nd pass me the link...

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    Re: First verse on this site

    i donnu how 2...

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    Re: First verse on this site

    nice shit, started off strong, fell off a lil as it went along, but overall a dope verse.

    "I Make emcees vanish, like a magician on stage
    i'm the type of beast they only allow to spit from a cage
    but Challengers who get hype on the mic, I murder em often
    so when facin me...
    save some time by just saying your verse from a coffin"

    ^that shit made it worth the read, stay active.

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