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    Freestyle - Scytso's

    We, Scytso's, are too good, no need to victimize
    We leave human cells out in the sun to liquidize
    And if they evaporate, the conclusion signifies
    That they weren't up to keep up with us if it dies
    Like Sensai's knowledge, there's no way you can criticize
    They say I should tone it down, but only metaphorically simplifies
    I can see your variables shivering, and within lies
    Like through a mouse hole, shallow, timid eyes
    We form lyrical lines that synchronize
    No matter what, you'll never see a thin demise
    Such prowess fine stitching like linen lines
    Leave contenders in a depressing syncline
    In time, they are taught valuable lessons from incline
    Evaluating and consultating your education system's thin time
    Like primary schools you're falling behind, it isn't hard too imply
    We are the ones with knowledgeable achievements
    Our lyrical contents leave you in atomical aggrievements
    Punch after punch, retalliation isn't formidable in sequence
    Play your mind games, you just have physical in weakness
    Like veterinarians, we can see that these cats are faking
    But we are Rap Kings and leave you all in relapsed debating
    Leave you like third world refugees forever evacuating
    If you show of big balls, you may of contracted testicular cancer
    When I ask for competitors for the crown, it's best if you don't answer
    You think you could compete at this altitude, just rest in you all banter
    Fast agile, the most complex with all out right agilities
    Smashing centenaries pleasing me, destroying your facilities
    Because in all honesty, no one can cope with these abilities
    Your blank cells no meaning, while I rest in tranquilities
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    Re: Freestyle - Scytso's

    nvr really read freestyles cuz majority of freestyles on here are wack and not my style but this was a sick piece. The opener was dope.

    We, Scytso's, are too good, no need to victimize
    We leave human cells out in the sun to liquidize


    the word play imagery and metaphors and vocab were all good. the flow was also pretty good. nothing really blew me away though most of the punches were pretty direct or self centered and some of the rhymes were forced.

    my favorite line
    We are the ones with knowledgeable achievements
    Our lyrical contents leave you in atomical aggrievements

    wackest line
    So observe, as my delivery of punches start venting vividly
    Girl, you say you like male siblings combined with sensitivity
    But that could give him homosexual relations, the mental imagery
    See, we destroy membranes, content like Freddy decapitating

    i just dont think gay jokes to nobody really makes sense and it seemed more like filler.
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    Re: Freestyle - Scytso's

    Quote Originally Posted by Lurid View Post
    nvr really read freestyles cuz majority of freestyles on here are wack and not my style but this was a sick piece. The opener was dope.

    We, Scytso's, are too good, no need to victimize
    We leave human cells out in the sun to liquidize


    the word play imagery and metaphors and vocab were all good. the flow was also pretty good. nothing really blew me away though most of the punches were pretty direct or self centered and some of the rhymes were forced.

    my favorite line
    We are the ones with knowledgeable achievements
    Our lyrical contents leave you in atomical aggrievements

    wackest line
    So observe, as my delivery of punches start venting vividly
    Girl, you say you like male siblings combined with sensitivity
    But that could give him homosexual relations, the mental imagery
    See, we destroy membranes, content like Freddy decapitating

    i just dont think gay jokes to nobody really makes sense and it seemed more like filler.
    Yea, I took it out.
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    Re: Freestyle - Scytso's

    vocab was on point, the flow was reletively simple yet consistent, the multies were present, for the most part everything was on point, but nothing above point that stood out too much, but a nice consistent joint nonetheless.

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    Fucin dope. Then you did it In name of scytso. You are 1 of the best writers, vocab and flow wise i seen here. Glad to have you on my side. But anywau. Once again a nice drop.. Good flow hella ncie vocab. Your creativity is always nice. You've gotten to the point where no one can hate cause everything u ever droped on rb has been dope. Keep the sht up, Slowly but surely building your self a rep. Nice drop.

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    Re: Freestyle - Scytso's

    Quote Originally Posted by Lurid View Post
    nvr really read freestyles cuz majority of freestyles on here are wack and not my style but this was a sick piece. The opener was dope.

    We, Scytso's, are too good, no need to victimize
    We leave human cells out in the sun to liquidize


    the word play imagery and metaphors and vocab were all good. the flow was also pretty good. nothing really blew me away though most of the punches were pretty direct or self centered and some of the rhymes were forced.

    my favorite line
    We are the ones with knowledgeable achievements
    Our lyrical contents leave you in atomical aggrievements

    wackest line
    So observe, as my delivery of punches start venting vividly
    Girl, you say you like male siblings combined with sensitivity
    But that could give him homosexual relations, the mental imagery
    See, we destroy membranes, content like Freddy decapitating

    i just dont think gay jokes to nobody really makes sense and it seemed more like filler.


    wackest line?



    there was no wake lines you fucin random piece of sht



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    westcoast hasnt been here longer then you and has more respect

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    Scytso's Up
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    Re: Freestyle - Scytso's

    ill feed.... this was pretty raw. The flow was aight, a little off here and there, but nothing major, seems like it could go good over a beat if you spit it right. I liked the vocab in this one, complex, but you definitely didn't over do it. Nothin too big as far as multis, not too many in this drop... thats alright tho, end rhyming was pretty good and was on point for sure. keep writing and stay up. I'd appreciate some feed on "Freestyle .... Keepin it Raw"

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    Re: Freestyle - Scytso's

    dope shyt
    the first bar was sick
    stay up

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    this was a nice drop west, mutli was it was fuckin sick. in the name of sctyso for sure. we need to do a collab in the near future.

    this was fuckin dope:

    Like Sensai's knowledge, there's no way you can criticize
    They say I should tone it down, but only metaphorically simplifies

    aslo this:

    Punch after punch, retalliation isn't formidable in sequence
    Play your mind games, you just have physical in weakness
    Like veterinarians, we can see that these cats are faking
    But we are Rap Kings and leave you all in relapsed debating

    good drop homie.


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    Re: Freestyle - Scytso's

    Quote Originally Posted by Accurit Phacts View Post
    Fucin dope. Then you did it In name of scytso. You are 1 of the best writers, vocab and flow wise i seen here. Glad to have you on my side. But anywau. Once again a nice drop.. Good flow hella ncie vocab. Your creativity is always nice. You've gotten to the point where no one can hate cause everything u ever droped on rb has been dope. Keep the sht up, Slowly but surely building your self a rep. Nice drop.

    SCYTSO!!!!!

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    this was raw dawg

    it didnt let me down

    still like ur other drops a lil more

    but never tha less its nice

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    Aha dope... appreciate all the feeds
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