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    wanna test your luck? christopher dre's Avatar
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    all right man

    okay lemme tell yall a little somethin...

    blow muh fuckahs right out the door, music too good so they say they want more/
    who say i'm a wack mc you can say it but one niggas ever battled me/
    so i say fakers get the fuck off of me/
    if really want it, hey then let's go, cause i've found the secrets too all yall flows/
    filler filler punchline give it to me one time did i win this time, cool let's go/
    i know some niggas write they shit, i didn't i haven't even bit/
    i ain't ever gonna bite, do shit on my own and it will be oh so tight/
    doubters are goona read my thread, lyrics gon be stuck in they head/
    its time to stop bein sorry, well bitch you done readin this lyrical story/

    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...go-373124.html

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    Town Rapist Ink Poyzin's Avatar
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    Re: all right man

    wtf, no disrespect, but this is trash.... no rhyme scheme, no nothing. only advice I can give is, maybe look into other pieces, see where you need the help at. nothin' more to say, wish ya luck. have a good night, man, peace..
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