No Ledge

[uncontrollable flow]

I admit that I ain’t nothing special, I am no ledge
But whenever you see me dropping its pure knowledge
This artistically simplistic vocabulary that you see me spit
This is my call to fame, this is how I will make it:
Compared to me, most of y’all only just a fraction
Because the truth is you only got half the attraction
Statistically speaking, I’m better than a third of you
Another third, who are you? I have never heard of you
The last third, are equal to me and some better than me
From the complex lyrics they be spitting you can see.
I have an obligation to the game to bring a new innovation
Determination, Hip Hop is my destination, music my inspiration
Lyrical concentration, multi rhyme scheme combination
Creating inspiration to other rappers in this generation
I stand up tall; you can’t make me fall like Niagara
I am rising up the rapbattle’s ranks quicker than viagra

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Constructive criticism welcome.

[Tejas.]

this was actually pretty good. good vocab and shizz.. i like how you came confident but not cocky. but yea it was good man.. and i thank you for making it a worthy read unlike most people who make an entrance and come all cocky as fuck and then cant back the shit up- ya dig?
stay up.

[uncontrollable flow]

Thx for the feedback.

[Dekken]

Yea this is pretty good man,I like ur use of vocab and u had a nice flow too...
Good job man keep up the writing......

[Havoc.]

Yo this was pretty good. nice vocab usage throughout the entire drop. i liked the style you used. the flow was cool. rhymes were cool. so overall pretty good man. keep writing.