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    A Razoreign Legacy

    Let it be.

    The Razoreign…
    A gothic savior of the Logic: Danger, and all Toxic Chambers
    The Warstorm. A darker side of all the anger in father nature
    Conquer vapors; developing a synchronized version of Dyons
    Equalize your purpose like Zion - Evil lies to verses to bygones.
    Feeble minds disturbing the cryon’s from the strangle of cells
    The immaculate spell: “Lets dangle a bell for the rattle of hell”
    Let my shady-craft pace make blood drip south Hades cascade
    Onslaught of strikes slay nine ways with my wavy Wrathblade
    Depicting ‘gorgeous gore’ - turning organs to morbid corridor’s
    Let my clones absorb the skin that skeletons had wore before
    A daily duty, my moan is chore misting with the cordage horde
    Reign upon the corps of War, as we roar for the storm of swords.
    Mouths open - crown hoping for scissors to cut parts of teeth
    Desiring the sharpened speech, that’ll inspire the darkest beast
    It’s tyranny-told; god awful with razors, bombarding the labor
    Get locked on the carnaging cage or I’ll strong-arm on the Saber
    Threats, terror, and words manipulating your every way of life
    Many men have died for the follow of: steady, pace, and fight
    Upon an angry cave at night; shining from a semi-wave of light
    Humanity’s cruel. So with a stake & knife, let me save your life
    From the insanity crises; shadowing as the damaging night shifts
    Not the vanity sizes, more of the apex when Inhumanity rises
    At world’s end - telescoping the dead as a conniving laser aims
    Viewing the meteor shower, as it collides with The Razoreign
    Another brute tale of honor, as it tears and boomshells your armor
    The Legend and Fable told from the glare of my Fuel Cell Katana.
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    Re: A Razoreign Legacy

    This was nice. One of my favorites on here for sure. Had a great flow, complexity, and rhyme scheme. I thought it was a nice 'dark' piece. Not really sure if the Razoreign is something that you created or truly exists (real or not), but I liked where you took the topic and how you played it. Nice drop!
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