Re-posted somewhere else n changed up a lil***
Re-posted somewhere else n changed up a lil***
Last edited by Barcotic; October 7th, 2008 at 08:59 PM
no too bad fam a lil basic tho but so far so good keep doin u
A 1 poster reply..? Common ya'll, it's been hours, wheres the actve members feedback..? ^^^
That feedback was b/s...
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http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...-360237p2.html
^^^see the last post...the only post on page two...apply it to your future drops
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I SAY NO HOMO 100 TIMES A DAY, IT KEEPS MY TEETH STRAIGHT!!!
It seemed like it was forced and the few punches I did see were weak. You do have potential with multis though.
It seemed like it was forced and the few punches I did see were weak. You do have potential with multis though.
LOL, there's a punch in every bar but ok, and I'd like 2 see better punches n wordplay from you...
Yo, I'd eat your food in a battle eeeaaasily... Im a well respected veteran from a better more talented site that got shut down... 134-14 in text battling so go fuck yourself if YOU think I'm garbage... Hatin on me for rhymin bout guns & hypin myself up??? Are you sayin 95% of rappers, wuns makin a LIVING off rhymin bout the same shit are garbage too..? Well sorry buddy but you're wrong so stfu... Aslong as it's TALENT (muties/flow/imagery/punches/wordplay) n aslong as you're not rhymin wun word rhymes n aslong it sounds good for audio, you can rhyme about any fuckin thing you wanna... Fact is, famous cats makin REAL MONEY are rhymin bout the same shit as I am so... You can keep writtin bout flowers n mother earth n see how far that gets you... lolOriginally Posted by The Pen Pwner
Last edited by Barcotic; February 14th, 2008 at 05:54 PM
Your punches are tight homie, and your swagger is obvious, but your vocab kinda plain. Your wordplay jus needs to be looked at a lil, change the lines around a lil cause a different placement for the words will bring out other word choice, like if you take the first word of a sentence and a last word and switch them now you can rhyme with that other word, or use symonyms, it dont always work but jus sometin i always try to keep in mind . . . ive been lookin for more street oriented writers but that can stick to a theme for a track not jus scattered punches and ill lines, some one said to me once, 16 hot bars is not as hot as 1 hot verse. know what i mean, topics. you, fo twenty, and myself should get up, try to find a few more RAPPERS like ourselves, lemmie know, stay up, fuck them, 1
that wasn't that great... it wasn't terrible, but it wasn't great... if you spit that on even an average mixtape, you'd disappear... nothin' memorable, that's all... keep at it yo...
^You should hear it on the Chevy Ridin High beat... Sick shit...
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