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Thread: Emotions Change as Season's Do - Jonathon & Wordz.

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    Emotions Change as Season's Do - Jonathon & Wordz.

    Emotions Change as Season's Do

    Jonathon & Wordz.


    Best and brightest, come away,
    Fairer far than this fair day,
    Which, like thee, to those in sorrow
    Comes to bid a sweet good-morrow
    To the rough year just awake
    In its cradle on the brake.
    The brightest hour of unborn Spring
    Through the Winter wandering,
    Found, it seems, the halcyon morn
    To hoar February born;
    Bending from Heaven, in azure mirth,
    It kissed the forehead of the earth,
    And smiled upon the silent sea,
    And bade the frozen streams be free,
    And waked to music all their fountains,
    And breathed upon the frozen mountains,
    And like a prophetess of May
    Strewed flowers upon the barren way,
    Making the wintry world appear
    Like one on whom thou smilest, dear.

    You fear your fears, inviting you to
    Come into the view and see a few,
    Monsters - or butterflies, as they fly by
    Your mind as well, you begin to wonder why.
    Questions remain unanswered,
    As your fingers feel hammered;
    Laying down reality,
    To try and help balance me...


    Feel the drips of rain ache your pain;
    And the wind through leaves call your name.
    As sure as the sun will burn your skin,
    You disown your world that you live in.
    Spend time at your own wonder land,
    Dreaming away, drifting off into another hand.


    Away, away, from men and towns,
    To the wild wood and the downs -
    To the silent wilderness
    Where the soul need not repress
    Its music, lest it should not find
    An echo in another's mind,
    While the touch of Nature's art
    Harmonizes heart to heart.

    You are your own wilted rose, spoken
    To all the little hearts who've also been broken.
    You wild, your not - you're bi-polar I guess;
    Your a sad dude in a bad mood;
    When you claim you don't feel your best.
    Repeat your defeat, and beat yourself to death;
    Or beat your self senseless
    So you can't feel the rest...


    Radiant Sister of the Day
    Awake! Arise! And come away!
    To the wild woods and the plains,
    To the pools where winter rains
    Image all their roof of leaves,
    Where the pine its garland weaves
    Of sapless green, and ivy dun,
    Round stems that never kiss the sun,
    Where the lawns and pastures be
    And the sand hills of the sea,
    Where the melting hoar-frost wets
    The daisy-star that never sets,
    And wind-flowers and violets
    Which yet join not scent to hue?
    Crown the pale year weak and new;
    When the night is left behind
    In the deep east, dim and blind,
    And the blue noon is over us,
    And the multitudinous
    Billows murmur at our feet,
    Where the earth and ocean meet,
    And all things seem only one
    In the universal Sun.

    From summer sun, to fall's leaves
    And winter's snow that falls with ease.
    From tears of joy, to smile with greed,
    And simple please's when you're in need.
    Its quite easy to see, not meaning to be rude...
    But your emotions change as seasons do.
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    Re: Emotions Change as Season's Do - Jonathon & Wo

    *Note - I will personally return the favor after you leave feed.

    Leave 2 links.
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    Re: Emotions Change as Season's Do - Jonathon & Wo

    I will also,link me and I got you all.
    Last edited by Wordz.; July 6th, 2007 at 07:39 PM

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    Re: Emotions Change as Season's Do - Jonathon & Wo

    ok this was a solid collab here by the two of you guys.Jon I think you should write more poetry because you have serious potential to be a top name on here and Wordz you are improving everyday, who knows whats in store for you.The piece itself was very good but one thing that bothered me was the forced lines that I read in the 2nd stanza especially, but other than that there were no complaints.The poem was some what dreamy and really ran smooth in places with some beautiful wording.I liked the title of this poem too really very clever and props to the person who picked it because it add to the feel of the poem.Well done guys and great read.Keep writing

    -Dyl
    Heard about the guy who fell off a skyscraper?
    On his way down past each floor,he kept saying to reassure himself
    So far so good.....
    So far so good.....
    So far so good.....

    But how you fall doesn't matter
    Its how you land

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    Re: Emotions Change as Season's Do - Jonathon & Wo

    Quote Originally Posted by Dyl View Post
    ok this was a solid collab here by the two of you guys.Jon I think you should write more poetry because you have serious potential to be a top name on here and Wordz you are improving everyday, who knows whats in store for you.The piece itself was very good but one thing that bothered me was the forced lines that I read in the 2nd stanza especially, but other than that there were no complaints.The poem was some what dreamy and really ran smooth in places with some beautiful wording.I liked the title of this poem too really very clever and props to the person who picked it because it add to the feel of the poem.Well done guys and great read.Keep writing

    -Dyl
    Thank you. I chose the title. And the second stanza was mine .

    I already RTF'd. Thanks again, I'm currently trying to bring myself into poetry a bit more... Uppin.
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    Re: Emotions Change as Season's Do - Jonathon & Wo

    Word thanks for the feed Dyl. .

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    Re: Emotions Change as Season's Do - Jonathon & Wo

    real odd poem here.. it kinda floated, gave off a weird vibe.. it flowed pretty well.. i'm not a big fan of Wordz's style but he had a nice part.. it was kinda choppy to me, but it worked out.. Jonathon's was more smooth, a lacked a bit of content though.. i still like it, but this line was just.. ugh..
    "Your a sad dude in a bad mood".. come on, you're better than that lmao.. still, pretty nice piece.
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    Re: Emotions Change as Season's Do - Jonathon & Wo

    lol its true though, i meant for that vibe to come off as a 'idontgiveaflyingfuck' attitude... anyways.. good looks, thanks for the feed.
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    Re: Emotions Change as Season's Do - Jonathon & Wo

    Up for a little more feed.

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    Re: Emotions Change as Season's Do - Jonathon & Wo

    Closed, Wordz bit his part
    A few achievements here and there

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