Writers Block

[da prophecy]

as i sit here struggling to develop ideas that make sense
i tend to catch myself throwing out nonsense
recieving headaches from refusing to quit
gets to the point where i just put out anything and shit
and just deal with the critisism and put it in my bag of hate
cant think of shit but i still manage to leave niggas ducktaped
get kidnapped by an all black truck and have 'em but raped
pages in my pad get confused from my lack of movements
fustrated at my mind cause i kepp askin myself where the screws went?
but my forced thoughts or better than others moving freely
off the top with evrything i drop and niggas still cant see me
looking for motivation from all my surroundings
headaches getting worse from all the pounding
throwing scraps away cause nothing feels right
feeling pressure from my ego to drop something hot
so i backspace constintley to make sure my words reach ears
let my verse to the talking so i walk away without any fears

[IL Duce]

Ok you are going to need to links if you want thus to s=tay open and quick.

I thought this piece was below par.It really was.The structure of your lines were streched which made your flow very choppy.You wer not creative and your whole verse looked very simple.There was no imagery in there either.These are the things you are lacking and what I suggest you start working on.If you want your OM's to be good then do what I say

[da prophecy]

http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=297144

[da prophecy]

http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...50#post4596750

[da prophecy]

and i had writers block when i droped it....thats why its named that...and it obviously aint gonna be the best drop if i had writers block...