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Thread: -Deaths Image-

  1. December 30th, 2005, 03:22 PM #1
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    Lightbulb -Deaths Image-

    Toes white, legs stiff as a carcas rests silently in place to rot...
    Pigment gone, entry wounds show that he took multiple shots...
    Heart collapsed and eyes rolled back, veins shot and blown in his arm...
    Laying face down in puddle of blood, lungs filled, but will have no harm...
    Blonde hair dyed red as he lay rigomortous upon his babies mother...
    Daughters insides are out spread about, heaped on her older brother...
    Ruthless revenge from unpayed dues leave this family down to 2...
    Neither walking on two feet, its there cat Fluffy and dog Scrappy Doo...
    CSI attempt to stop passers by but all glimpse and start to stare...
    It was inevidable with death and corosion's sent drifting about the air...
    News reporters quick on scene become nautious before they start questioning...
    Investigators wont say a thing, 9mm and butcher knife is weapons their mentioning...
    Heads hung low, hands clasped together saying their words when the stretcher comes out...
    Body bags tied down like christmas trees as tears pour from eyes like water spouts...
    Mind boggled with mouth dropped in awe, the obituaries have a lengthy heart-felt scripture...
    Unbelievable as I stand there and gaze.......... Thank god Deaths Image was just a Picture..
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  2. December 30th, 2005, 03:28 PM #2
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  3. December 30th, 2005, 03:45 PM #3
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    clap...clap...clap - the flow n structure kinda went off at the end but bsides that - nuffin but good shit nigga, loved the first bar - it was simple like we was talkin bout, but still got the words across - clear.............n i knew it was goin b a twist at the end n' i like how u freaked it - good shit
    8/10, keep it comin

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  4. December 30th, 2005, 03:54 PM #4
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  5. December 30th, 2005, 11:56 PM #5
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  6. January 2nd, 2006, 06:30 AM #6
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    Red face tha comebac

    Quote Originally Posted by Young_Block
    Toes white, legs stiff as a carcas rests silently in place to rot...
    Pigment gone, entry wounds show that he took multiple shots...
    Heart collapsed and eyes rolled back, veins shot and blown in his arm...
    Laying face down in puddle of blood, lungs filled, but will have no harm...
    Blonde hair dyed red as he lay rigomortous upon his babies mother...
    Daughters insides are out spread about, heaped on her older brother...
    Ruthless revenge from unpayed dues leave this family down to 2...
    Neither walking on two feet, its there cat Fluffy and dog Scrappy Doo...
    CSI attempt to stop passers by but all glimpse and start to stare...
    It was inevidable with death and corosion's sent drifting about the air...
    News reporters quick on scene become nautious before they start questioning...
    Investigators wont say a thing, 9mm and butcher knife is weapons their mentioning...
    Heads hung low, hands clasped together saying their words when the stretcher comes out...
    Body bags tied down like christmas trees as tears pour from eyes like water spouts...
    Mind boggled with mouth dropped in awe, the obituaries have a lengthy heart-felt scripture...
    Unbelievable as I stand there and gaze.......... Thank god Deaths Image was just a Picture..








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  7. January 2nd, 2006, 06:35 AM #7
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    ^^ Hata, anyway dopest drop i've seen in a while, this script really woke me up, no flaws anywhere, the creativity blew my mind, keep droppin em. peace

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  8. January 2nd, 2006, 09:12 AM #8
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    feelin the vocab nice piece.something fresh n creative.
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  9. January 2nd, 2006, 12:12 PM #9
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    Quote Originally Posted by Tae Profit
    clap...clap...clap - the flow n structure kinda went off at the end but bsides that - nuffin but good shit nigga, loved the first bar - it was simple like we was talkin bout, but still got the words across - clear.............n i knew it was goin b a twist at the end n' i like how u freaked it - good shit
    8/10, keep it comin
    its a fuckin text drop how is the flow nice??!!....wow ur stupid.....clear how couldnt it be clear ur readin to urself ....smh.....an he freaked the end??....sounds homo to me...
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