gimme a few ...
gimme a few ...
Upping yo!
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yeahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
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good use of words, multies were coo in bio's verse.... flow was off a bit and the opening lines could use work, but they were still cool... the story picked up as i t wne t along
Catch grips. Eyes with bags, hence my pencil strokes with an ill tip.
Mimic any image. Perfected even if perplexed. I'm God's gift."
that was dope, cool shit there.. it sounded dope on audio i rapped it over a beat
miss, that three line structure is cool in OM, its original, but the lines werent stretched or anything... i dunno, just wasnt feelin it, but the flow and vocab was cool.... what was insomnia rhyming with at the end
overall - pretty cool collab. too bad tt says death to IJL though
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=261477
RTF YO!
done.
Appreciate the feed.
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