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Thread: One Nation Part 2.

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    One Nation Part 2.

    As we travel from the beggining to the end of the earth,
    I think every member of congress was a demon at birth,
    I used to think everyone was just believing at first,
    It's not an ocean on Earth to quench America's thirst,
    we so full of shit, we ready to burst,
    We think we the best country but were actually the worst,
    No wonder everyone hates us, it's America's curse,
    Now all i wanna do is put George Bush in a hurse,
    Forget everythin Bush does to caver his plans,
    We all just sit and watch him destroy America with his own bare hands,
    You can see evil in his eyes...look at this man!,
    We dont need to expand,
    Like the History book maps he's dividing the land,
    Even including him, divided we stand,
    We rose up like a nation before buch came,
    Now were receeding into darkness like Bablyon, we're all now slain,
    I see the mark of the beast when i look in his eyes,
    Try not to be fooled by his human discuise,
    The planet's getting darker because of his lies,
    We complain about doing something but nobody tries,
    I can't hepl but to spit on this subject and i'm still not done,
    Bush can kill more people with a phone call then you can with a gun,
    I already have a daughter and i might have a son,
    After the war has ended, chaos will still run,
    I dont want my children growing up in Bush's bane,
    They'll keep askin Mellissa, " Is daddy insane?"
    Because every day i see him i'm pissed off, like i was a lion and he was grabbin my mane,
    If we destroyed Iraq, what the fuck would we gain,
    The other day i looked at my daughter and Mellissa and kissed them goodbye,
    While i'm gone i want them to know i love them, because i just might die...

    Course:

    African American, Native America, and Hispanic is my background,
    I'm commin for Bush and it's too late to backdown,
    For my culture and family, i will not quit,
    Until George Bush doesn't have a spot in the government to sit,
    Instead of throwin darts at his a Binladin's pic on my wall,
    I'm gonna get up and do something instead of watching my county fall,

    2nd verse:

    (listen) this isn't a racism track,
    i'd do the same thing if George Bush was black,
    Agreeing with him is like giving the Devil a pat on the back,
    They're tryin to stop drugs but he's the main dealer pushin this crack,
    Dont get me wrong, he's not alone in this deal,
    The governments twisted, they want to see everyone kneal,
    When the seven angels of god open the 1st seal,
    You'll see all of the souls congress is ready to steal,
    I wield the power to put an end to this chaotic reign,
    Nobody in the government can feel our pain,
    But the sick ness of Earth is what makes us cringe,
    we need to be finding cures instead of ploting revenge,
    If we find a cure for cancer then we would be even more wealthy,
    And a lot of American's would be even more healthy,
    Someone dying of cancer could find the cure for AIDS,
    Just take money from the rich fuckers who pay for maids,
    Instead of taking money from minorities searching for something to eat for two days,
    Who has all the money to pay sports players their cheese,
    That money could go to poor people eyes closed, hands folded, and down on thier knees,
    Why does one person get so much money for playing a game,
    When some people dont hae enough alphabet soup to spell out their name,
    It was Katrina who came and showed the government's true face,
    How can you rush to Iraq but take forever to help home base,
    How can you say good morning America when we are all asleep on this subject,
    If Bush was killed, i'll be the main suspect,
    Rise and shine America! I guess now we're out of luck,
    I commin for Bush with C4s in the truck,
    I used to wanna fight for my country but now i dont give a fuck...

    Course:

    African American, Native America, and Hispanic is my background,
    I'm commin for Bush and it's too late to backdown,
    For my culture and family, i will not quit,
    Until George Bush doesn't have a spot in the government to sit,
    Instead of throwin darts at his a Binladin's pic on my wall,
    I'm gonna get up and do something instead of watching my county fall,

    3rd verse:

    We are living in a time that is literally hell,
    fuck freedom, I'm the one who cracked the Liberty Bell,
    America's my last choice, both middle finger to this region,
    My empires commin up and we got about a legion,
    When my lyrics and actions come together and merge,
    It generates a sinister and unbeatable eurge,
    I wasn't gonna kill Bush but now i'm on the Verge,
    This may seem like a violent rap but it's really a dirge,
    R.I.P. to "Diego" and "Gimmie" who died in Iraq,
    I need to stop this pandimonium and get on the right track,
    I never trusted Bush do i'm not the one stabbed in the back,

    This is my favorite out of all of my raps....please feed....i need some feed on this.

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    come on uppin this

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    Putting "Verse 1" and "verse 2" just looks weird. People can usually figure out what they are
    You had emotion which is a plus, but on a played out topic and one I think is an idiotic topic
    Content is mediocre. Include more witty lines if you are dissing someone. All this seems is a diss to Bush.
    Scytsophrenia

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    i got more OM but noebody pays attention

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