stizzy vs. mister grim

[stizzy]

fuckit ill go, ya ass said you was gunna set it up
house rules..blahzey, blahzey you know the shit

One by one ima have you lame ass mc niggas droppin/
Jus call me the Pringles ma, cuz once i pop they aint no stoppin/

this nigga was supposeto set this up, but he cant even do this shit/
you want me to write ya flow for ya too....or can ya write ya own spit?/

I let my words speak fo myself, so i dont have to tell ya/
No matter how good you is, ill be just a shade above you..likea beach umbrella/

Since its christmas time i decided to be nice and get yo girl a "personal" toy/
This is to help us all out...cuz i heard that bitch has burned more Trojans than Troy/

to be cool wit you though, afta the battle i wont talk smack/
only to come up and remove ya spine, to let you know this nigga got yo back/


now do whatcha do

[stizzy]

explanations: Pringles man, the commercial" once ya pop ya just cant stop"

he said he would set up the battle but didnt

ok a beach umbrella is a shade above you if ya didnt know

personal toy- dildo
burned more trojans than troy- trojan as in condom, then history shit troy burned alot of trojans to kill them
the rest is easy

[MISTA GRIM]

u didn't even let me know-u just started talkin'
little wanna be mc-hit the track and start walkin'
u sayin' u the pringles man-why u talkin junk
u supposed to be a rapper but u dressed up as a punk
u lack flava-and u have no funk
i'm tired of newbs dissin'-stizzy got an issue
he so weak i put 'em to sleep wit a kleenex tissue
u brought it upon ya self now i'm a diss u
that's the last punch in this last crunch of time
and he's the last bunch of garbage i'm a speak about in this rhyme

[Young_Chopper317]

grim won wit better punches not a good battle but personals goes to grim too that prigles shit was like chips corny ass hell elevatle my guy u had a good verse other then that

v/grim no hate need i say more

[<Supreme>]

nothing
vs
gd verse (grim)

stizzy - u didnt flow
u rhymed craply
u didnt punch

mista grim - flowed alrite
rhymed alrite
punched alot

v/ mista grim

[J-2wice]

vote for grimm cause when he said 'suppost to be a rapper but dressed like a punk'...lol...killed him....also stizzy have more creativity instead of using fat jokes...shits way played

[suffa MC]

my vote goes to stizzy he got styl and a story to his rap not bad but still they both suck reely bad

[MADDUS]

Opener=grim, both had word play, grim had diss
Rhyme scheme=stizzy, bars were even
Flo=,stizzy,^^same reason
Vocab=none
Multiz=none
Wordplay=stizzy, 4 to 1
Metaz=stizzy,trojan line, grim none
Similies=stizzy,umbrella line, grim none
Diss= grim, funk and garbage lines
Personals=tie, none that were real
Punches=stizzy, the closer, grim had none
Complexity=stizzy,closer vs grim, tissue line cuda been hot, reword
Closer=stizzy,closer was best line of the battle, punch,wordplay,
vs grim, was just a statement

vote=stizzy, , stizzys closer killed,more cats, no hate elevate

[MADDUS]

Opener=grim, both had word play, grim had diss
Rhyme scheme=stizzy, bars were even
Flo=,stizzy,^^same reason
Vocab=none
Multiz=none
Wordplay=stizzy, 4 to 1
Metaz=stizzy,trojan line, grim none
Similies=stizzy,umbrella line, grim none
Diss= grim, funk and garbage lines
Personals=tie, none that were real
Punches=stizzy, the closer, grim had none
Complexity=stizzy,closer vs grim, tissue line cuda been hot, reword
Closer=stizzy,closer was best line of the battle, punch,wordplay,
vs grim, was just a statement

vote=stizzy, , stizzys closer killed,more cats, no hate elevate

[MISTA GRIM]

up................................................ ............

[b_rEEz]

alrite...both had nice flow, and rhyming...although some of stizzys lines seemed stretched....although his closer was better...i was feelin grims whole verse....he dropped nice punches....

v/ Grim....if stizzy coulda dropped a few more personals...he coulda took it

no hate


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[Baby-Smile'z]

GRIM MY MAN, i liked how ur words are put its kool and ur structer eh ill give u half but overall u kicked ass..//....