on more thing the flow in this piece was crazy
on more thing the flow in this piece was crazy
Thanx
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the title caught my attention man, it inspired me to write something like this before i even read it, after readin it man, i can tell u it was strong, real strong, realistic with a good flow, keep it up
Nice drop frost. u had all the basics and sum extras. keep droppin.
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pretty good kept it real wit everythin
Thanx uppin
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Ha.. I remember when Ronald Reagan used to say a mind is a terrible thing to waste. This verse was pretty good. It kept my attention for the most part. You should have elevated your vocab, but you still came pretty nicely on this piece...
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