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    The Call Out

    Any click any crew could get it
    me vs. you any casino any bookie would bet it
    battle me rookie forget it u will regret it
    I'll have u like u was drafted by herm edwards quick to jet it

    Philly Blanco Not one to use Big Words
    Im like the supermarket during thanksgiving i move big birds
    Rock local battlegrounds for big purses
    Shit its a hunned to one odds on whoever the kid versus

    So if you want any problems head east bound
    I'll be waitin for u wit my 4 pound
    go ahead knock my door down ill applaud u
    Cuz lil do u know the ratchet's fixed to the peephole like saw 2 ( whoa!)

    my metaphors is really that poppin
    I do wat u talk i rock wat u not rockin
    I spend wat u cant spend Im straight shoppin till im droppin
    keep ya comments to ya self u need stop jockin

    I will never stop clockin
    even tho the cops is timin my runs wit a stop clock watchin
    tryin to figure out why the fiends never stop coppin
    Not gettin this guac n being popped has ever been an option.

    Damn Im blackin out like the summer of 04
    emcees is like " what a bummer hes so raw
    Look at his hummer it has no doors
    Hes the reason us broke muthafuckas have no whores"

    My talent was never one to write
    drugs and freestylin how i balanced my life
    A savage wit mic's u average at best
    battle me i swing u a L like i passed u sum cess

    u embarresed n vexed knowin u couldnt pass my test
    so sad n upset u turn manic depressive
    the urge to kill ya self u wont manage to supress it
    all panicked n sweatin u'll jump off ya roof n damage a lexus

    EASY

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    [i]This Wasent Very Good,Flowed Ok.

    Lines Like

    "all panicked n sweatin u'll jump off ya roof n damage a lexus"
    "battle me i swing u a L like i passed u sum cess

    Made Not Grreat Sense,Plus This Peice Was Not Very Complex and Next Time around use The Proper Punctuation And Such.

    Drop Two Link's Before This Close's...

    -Teer

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    doesnt make sense to you. id have to argue that u just cant understand it!

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    yo, what you lack in complexity you make up for in humor, cause there was some pretty funny shit in there man.
    elevate your raps and keep flowin jokes yo,

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    Closed. Read the rules, especially the new one.

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