thug, i dont hate you personally, i just hate the way you write. and i hate the way you cross out words from ur sigs, shit got me laughing.
thug, i dont hate you personally, i just hate the way you write. and i hate the way you cross out words from ur sigs, shit got me laughing.
word that pisses me off too...but be nicer to my man thug please lol.
peace.
AI
“ˇViva la Revolución!”
Aiight.
You two.
Lets do a collab.
hell no thug, i do collabs with dope people.
pz.
Let Me Break The Ice,When You Have To "Upp"Somthing 4 Times Or Better Yet Post At All Just To Move It Up Means That No One Liked It and Its Wack.I Just Read This and Had To Say That But I will Leave Feed.
Lines Were To Big!The Lines Sucked!Go Write a Dr. Seus Book Man,No-One Cares About That Story.Get more Complex In Your Rhyme Scheme.I didnt Take You Serious when I Read You Name is "lil Thug".Get Real Dude....
By The Way I Think Your Sig's Are all Wack.This Is Not Trying to Hate,I'am just saying What I Feel.....
-Teer
No Hate, But I could have wrote something better than this in 30 Seconds using 1 finger to type =D
<<The real Renegade
^^^please die.
first of all his lines were perfectly fine...second of all atleast be constructive in your critasism and thirdly this is about his drop, not about his fucking sig. you ass.
for fuck sake i hate people like you.
AI
“ˇViva la Revolución!”
Get Off His Dick,If You Talking Wild,You Know where To Set Up,If Not Then Just Keep Quiet...
Constructive In Critisim??Lmao..
-Teer
yes...indeed...and im not on his dick he's a bitch im on his pussy!
AI
“ˇViva la Revolución!”
first of all verbal infaginy, renegade and i could whore the shit out of you. text & topical. so fuck up plz, cuz there's no way you can suck so much and talk that much shit.
That Was Aimed at??
-Teer
lines were pretty good...sum places were aiight but mostly good
complexity was aiight...could have been upped same with vocab
flow was smooth mostly throguh and struuctre was good...
nice drop but choose a differetn topci next time...peace
Closed. Only 1 drop per 24 hours and decent feedback isn't half a line of writing. Next time put in links where you commented on the person's choice of topic, use of vocab, imagery and rhyme scheme.
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