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    ! Dreams !

    Hey guys, heres a verse i done wen bored, still new to writin (well kinda) jst lookin 4 ways to elevate.

    chek it

    Dreams, just fixated pictures never seen,
    Lies from the brain and illusions for a teen,
    Un-keen to life, coz it isn’t making any sense,
    Its whole irrelevance of intelligence is too immense,
    Brains is nothing streetwise u need to be,
    Coz one knife and then it’s a prize to even breathe,
    To blind to see the hearts being torn apart,
    I fink my whole plan from god was being born to start,
    A new revolution, to execute execution,
    Or with a contribution be able to find a new conclusion,
    And put confusion, aside and teach respect,
    With a direct conversation to every intellect,
    And correct their brain, that’s polluted by the drugs,
    From being raised by thugs without kisses or hugs,
    This just sucks, there’s got to be another way,
    People should be happy to even see another day,
    So to every mc who’s ever written about this topic,
    Lets join brainwave, combine intelligence and stop it,
    Tell angriness to hop it and let love then break through,
    Before evilness surrounds the whole world and then takes you.

    Hope ya enjoyed reading

    Feedbak plz


    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...857#post2829857

    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=215401
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    Ne feedbak guys?

    tryna elevate but need sum tips and tat

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    c'mon guys, need feedbak

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    The first link is broken. Second feed was just.. lame feedback. Honestly, take your time when you leave feed. Closed.
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