"Full Metal Jacket"

[The Franchi$e]

im here now the kings back so kill the racket/
but yall niggas who hatin better load ya ratchet/
cause the kids solo again and like bad TV's im causin static/
and since im out for blood better wrap in that full metal jacket/
and im killin any rapper that pop of so try and play me yo/
i led the illest crew on the fab.coms boards, and thats true as the kids flow/
lemme make what i say clear cause im sirius (Serious) like satellite radio/(damn get it?)
the skills are too ill i make rapper checks stop FAST now they starvin like Rhamadan/
and yall niggas know the battle verses level shit like a United States Atomic Bomb/
et ya minds right i done said it one time before/
and if you dont like me man we can go to war/
im on top still baby im not cocky so chill wit that got me/
before both ya eyes get swollen shut like Arturro Gatti/
im the master chess player yall need to learn to play better/
im the only undefeated nigga to many like im Floyd Mayweather/
and im better than most the niggas yall gas up and im not playin/
and do me a favor if you cant fuck wit me save ya air and quit ya hatin/
so consider this a diss and a callout to any nigga that think im wack/
shoot a diss my way and like a gun wit a bad hammer im gonna fire back/
and after the battle i swear ya reputation wil be cracked like a Mark Magwire bat/
ive been shot and beat before but im grown now so neither will happen again/
but my words will be my bullets and ill send them to any rapper who swears they can win/
i got the crown to lose and nothin to gain/
so what am i sayin haters just holla at me Mane/
pop a gun so i can turn ya face plate to a spaghetti stain/
man yall niggas ass and need to chill so my shell will be the sedatives/
ya teams is like 1/2 the 2nd level of government man, no representatives (get it?)/
man im like Pac a killer, but some nigga done already pushed me/
who knew when i arrived that ya rep would dry up like elderly pussy(LOL)/
to be an ill MC stick wit me the kid will show you like a don supposed to/
but cross me wrong and ill hit you from long distance like boost mobile/

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...41#post2654241
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...78#post2654378

[Mistral]

2 links, not 1.

[The Franchi$e]

gettin the other

[The Franchi$e]

uppin man WTF???

[The Vortex]

i like that sirius line that was ok..
a few lines was maybe a bit overstretched and went off track a little
starving like rammadam,... yeah fosho

a few rhymes was a bit too basic, war before etc
multi attempt was decent but some seemed a bit off
decent wordplay tho, and punches almost on point, just maybe a little off or stretched again

who knew when i arrived that ya rep would dry up like elderly pussy(LOL)/

phew!

looks pretty good tho, nice style,, just maybe tighten the flow and multis up a little to get on point


check out ma piece-

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=208003

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