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Thread: the mirror

  1. February 26th, 2004, 02:16 PM #1
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    the mirror

    this is a poem that i wrote looking into the mirror i wrote as i spoke i have now idea where it came from and all who've heard have their own interpretation of what it means so take it how you see fit

    as i stand beside myself i see that i am not the man that i am
    i am not the man that i have become nor the man i am to be
    as i stand beside myself i see all the faces of humanity
    a word lost in it's vain for what i have yet not become
    as i stand beside myself the realization of my complexcity
    is hidden in the embodyment of the man of which i am not
    as i stand beside myself the man that i am is only what i see
    and i am only the man that i am when i stand beside myself
    shut the fuck up

    even if i stutter i'll still sh-sh-shit on you/ pun

    dead in middle of little of little italy
    little did we know that we riddle
    some middle man who didn't do ditally/ pun
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  2. February 26th, 2004, 11:29 PM #2
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  3. February 27th, 2004, 12:24 PM #3
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    i wrote somthings like this before, but ahd no replies..probably just me. so i can relate to you, i never know who i am, who i was and who im going to be in the future. lifes a mistory and you showed that sights can be blurred and disoreinted. nice peice keep it up .peace.
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  4. February 27th, 2004, 12:38 PM #4
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    I enjoyed it, I could relate myself, the work was in and out but was a short peice so perfection wasn't in demand, It was good for what it was, I will be watching for other peices you drop, Keep up the good work.
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  5. February 29th, 2004, 04:04 PM #5
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  6. February 29th, 2004, 07:40 PM #6
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    Nice Stuff...I wrote one like this.Expression was there, emotion and flow. Nice stuff.

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    good lookin on the replies uppin for more
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  8. March 6th, 2004, 09:23 PM #8
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  9. March 10th, 2004, 08:53 AM #9
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