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Thread: SS: Holding Down The Fort

  1. February 18th, 2004, 06:19 PM #1
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    SS: Holding Down The Fort

    Entered this world as a prisoner, without having any choice..
    A child without a voice, and a family that I would not rejoice..
    As a child I had to protect the others, as father drank his scotch..
    Because we all knew he would beat mother, and make us watch..
    And it was just one day, that he would turn his rage on one of us..
    I’d take the beating if it was a must, just to end my fathers fuss..
    Cuz being the oldest, I learned the ways to take my fathers pain..
    And not lay blame on others, but to take it as my own disdain..
    Yet through all the anger I contain, I still must show some love..
    Because showing love, is the only escape I can even think of..
    So as my soul started to dwindle, I realized my life was not here..
    I took my brothers and sisters looking for a solution to appear..
    So here I am without any care, look for a chance at a new life..
    A life, where I do not have to deal with any of my fathers strife..
    And as I look around, I feel free, away from my father’s tyranny..
    With all the support I will ever need, in the form of this family..
    And I know that through their constant love and signs of support..
    That I will finally be able to rebuild, this families broken fort..
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  2. February 18th, 2004, 06:31 PM #2
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    This was good man. Very Emotional piece. I could see the pictures in my head and the piece was very good. Great opening lines kept me going and it never really droped off.. so Props man...


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  3. February 18th, 2004, 06:32 PM #3
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    Hey guy I know I'm new

    It's original and the schemes good

    I thought it wqas all around good
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  4. February 18th, 2004, 07:40 PM #4
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    I agree this was a nice piece here man....I enjoyed the read....structure in this was nice.....the flow was pretty solid in it, it flowed pretty smoothly....you had some nice vocab in there.....the content was nice, I liked it....you also had good imagery I thought...overall a nice piece.
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  5. February 18th, 2004, 07:59 PM #5
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    Big props. the scheme was good but the story wasnt original
    but ya good flow n Dope realism giv it that dopeness that I know
    Speek holds. I liked ya use of multis here as ya used them
    in a way where they dint get boring. Nice piece n Shud be a good contender
    for a drop of the month.pz
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  6. February 18th, 2004, 10:01 PM #6
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    Nice peice.
    Emotion seems to always win in ss
    So you prob gon win gainst my free
    -For my Verse. he Versed.
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  7. February 18th, 2004, 10:05 PM #7
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    This.... Was... B-E-A-utiful

    on the real... *Tear*...

    felt it from start to finish an the close was nice an decent... good ish dunny...

    this was a good piece ... yep... 8/10

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    Peep My ... L.I.F.E. ... Piece... Yep

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  8. February 18th, 2004, 10:12 PM #8
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    played topic but it was good, real nice imagery and very easy to understand with the basic concept. made for an easy read and flow never dropped off good work on this man props. peace

    hit up my piece "Visions of a Dreamer" muchly appreciated thanx in advance.
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  9. February 19th, 2004, 06:14 AM #9
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    lets up this to get some more feed, thanks for all teh feed guys
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  10. February 20th, 2004, 12:04 AM #10
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    .. what can i say.. your good.. everything was ill but concept was a lil played.. but any thing worth writing ends up played ehhh but i liked this.. everything could of been better.. but hey.. even the dopest legends could have been better.. but this is better then mine so i cant say shit.. pce
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