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    What The Worlds Like. .

    What Makes The Like. .

    Caught Emotions, Tears in Eye to Know my life is Based off False Devotion,
    My Mind Burns, the Image of Those Hellish Figures, continue Slow Erosion.
    Explosions & Bullets, Feelings are Expressed, if u have the Guts to Pull it,
    Based on Facts of Fiction, our World is in Danger by the Iggnorant & Foolish.
    And Drugs Carrode our Streets, while Cops eat Donuts on there Potrol Beat,
    Condenced Lies, to Say we Tried, as Kids sit at Home with None Too Eat.
    With Wealth & Monoplies, where Happiness is the Antithesis of the Life,
    For the People who Run our Country, & go to war with no Reason to Fight.
    Diseases destroy Lives, America a place for Broken Hearts & Hurting
    We asked to Be Treated with Respect, but theres still Children not Learning.
    Words are Twisted, writers Black Listed, my Opinion is Corrected by You,
    Enough Tombs to Fill a State & Everyone has had Enough of Paying there Dues.
    Families Abuse, Kids Tramatized by seeing a Loved On Die So Young,
    Singing Songs when Death is Here, but they Already Know the Soon to Come.
    Can we all Tell whats Wrong & Right, let the world know threw the Songs I Write,
    & I Know now that life isnt Perfect, so I live it how it is, What the Worlds Like. . .
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    descent peice here dawg,good use of vocab and flow was mostly on point,liked afew of the points mentioned

    With Wealth & Monoplies, where Happiness is the Antithesis of the Life,
    For the People who Run our Country, & go to war with no Reason to Fight

    liked that,had som meta's and imagery,need to work on multies and jus finishin touches but good drop,keep elevatin.

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    Good imagery...
    Nice vocab...
    Flow was nice...

    Kind of short in my mind...
    Dont know why...


    But good drop man
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    iLL drop here man...Really down to earth...True shit...I liked it...And could relate to it a lot...Structure was good...Rhymin' was good...

    Based on Facts of Fiction, our World is in Danger by the Iggnorant & Foolish.

    I liked that line...The beginning was dope...Keep it up peace

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    werd, i gotta agree wit what mentill said. I can def relate to this shit. Your content was good, vocab and rhyme was good and on point to. Good post, keep it up, 1

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    I like tha whole flow in general. I agree wit all of them. This gets a 8.5 outta 10. Keep droppin dawg. 1
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    Yeah this was a good piece, it was worth the read, it flowed very well i thought, you had good vocab, your content was good too, as well was the topic, overall good piece, keep dropping.

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