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    LLL PLAYOFF RD1: Fresh vs Exalted FRESH WINS

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    Re: LLL PLAYOFF RD1: Fresh vs Exalted

    Fresh aka Habitat on NC


    Fresh once you're down in votes PM Spree & Blue to get help quick...
    You'll shit the bed & we'll think fuck....why Duvets Cover em w/ that layer of protection?
    Shoot you infront of ya crew for the shellshock then spray up ur circle..
    Things flash before their eyes while the 'Blast Processing' like an old Sega commercial
    If Zelph paid green for us to meet i'd KO this faggot clean off his feet..
    Fuck jail....I'll take Cookie Dough, Ball Up & beat to add something sweet to my sheet
    You take concepts & remix, but the wordplay comes out dumb as shit
    Dog everytime your wording hits a wall you 'Kill the Flip' like Pac in Above the Rim
    Your girl measured my dick size, said it's "bigger than Fresh its no lie"
    Only had one inch from the guy, now that 'Ex is ten she'll' start to question her life
    They put me vs an RB midtier, the matchup was insanity..
    Built ur home on a cheap site cuz nowhere else loved ya...so I'll end Habitat for Humanity
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    Re: LLL PLAYOFF RD1: Fresh vs Exalted

    shit gon' get violent, faggot.. peep the gore
    i will stab utilize fall out ya head and you can't use em too see no more
    these blows to ur head will devastate ur aura
    I'll leave you in a vegetative state.. and we ain't going to California
    you got creeper vibes going.. guarantee you rock a moustache
    but no doubt the girls u got locked up will eventually break out... in a rash
    he'll never reach new heights ex all about suckin
    his entire careers been an uphill battle Andes STILL Amountin to nothing..
    ur life is depressing, its a real shame bro
    you're so flat broke I mistook you for Artie Lange's nose
    this a pass for me, where im sending u you'll have time for some reflection
    i won't just knock you out the league exile beat you into another dimension

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    Re: LLL PLAYOFF RD1: Fresh vs Exalted VOTE NOW

    Exalted


    Fresh once you're down in votes PM Spree & Blue to get help quick...
    You'll shit the bed & we'll think fuck....why Duvets Cover em w/ that layer of protection?
    It's pronounced "du - vay" not "du - vet". Even if it sounded the way you wanted, the punch is stretched. Good idea, but the execution... not so much
    Shoot you infront of ya crew for the shellshock then spray up ur circle..
    Things flash before their eyes while the 'Blast Processing' like an old Sega commercial
    The theme is cool, but the setup line hits harder than the punch does. The setup works but the punch aint harsh, not even really dissin him
    If Zelph paid green for us to meet i'd KO this faggot clean off his feet..
    Fuck jail....I'll take Cookie Dough, Ball Up & beat to add something sweet to my sheet
    I was wit it until the punch. First thought was that was gay af.
    You take concepts & remix, but the wordplay comes out dumb as shit
    Dog everytime your wording hits a wall you 'Kill the Flip' like Pac in Above the Rim
    "Kill the flip" could be misconstrued as a compliment. This is aight
    Your girl measured my dick size, said it's "bigger than Fresh its no lie"
    Only had one inch from the guy, now that 'Ex is ten she'll' start to question her life
    I like the thought of using an existential wp, can't say I've seen one. It likely would've hit harder if you focused on that concept instead of a dick joke. Best bar so far.
    They put me vs an RB midtier, the matchup was insanity..
    Built ur home on a cheap site cuz nowhere else loved ya...so I'll end Habitat for Humanity
    Decent np. Ok closer.


    Existential is the lone standout. Kill the flip, sega commercial, and humanity are the only other ones I thought were ok and had potential. You do a good job of tying your setups to your punches, but your punches don't often attack your opponent consistently or directly.

    6/10

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    Fresh

    shit gon' get violent, faggot.. peep the gore
    i will stab utilize fall out ya head and you can't use em too see no more
    Would've liked more than just 'utilize' in the punch. Aight-ish
    these blows to ur head will devastate ur aura
    I'll leave you in a vegetative state.. and we ain't going to California
    flows but doesn't hit
    you got creeper vibes going.. guarantee you rock a moustache
    but no doubt the girls u got locked up will eventually break out... in a rash
    Nice
    he'll never reach new heights ex all about suckin
    his entire careers been an uphill battle Andes STILL Amountin to nothing..
    I would've done "a mountain" but this works. Solid
    ur life is depressing, its a real shame bro
    you're so flat broke I mistook you for Artie Lange's nose
    Above avg filler
    this a pass for me, where im sending u you'll have time for some reflection
    i won't just knock you out the league exile beat you into another dimension
    Decent closer

    There's a big difference in how each verse flows, in your favor. I weigh that heavily enough that you only needed two good bars to win. You brought about three. Do more of the break out, mountain, dimension type bars next week.

    7.5/10


    V Fresh
    Last edited by -Coop-; January 28th, 2020 at 05:35 PM
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    Re: LLL PLAYOFF RD1: Fresh vs Exalted VOTE NOW

    Fresh once you're down in votes PM Spree & Blue to get help quick...
    You'll shit the bed & we'll think fuck....why Duvets Cover em w/ that layer of protection?
    like where u were going but came out forced.. it is pronounced 'doo vaa'
    Shoot you infront of ya crew for the shellshock then spray up ur circle..
    Things flash before their eyes while the 'Blast Processing' like an old Sega commercial
    ok.. wasnt that hard hitting tho
    If Zelph paid green for us to meet i'd KO this faggot clean off his feet..
    Fuck jail....I'll take Cookie Dough, Ball Up & beat to add something sweet to my sheet
    lol nah i didnt like this.. came off corny af
    You take concepts & remix, but the wordplay comes out dumb as shit
    Dog everytime your wording hits a wall you 'Kill the Flip' like Pac in Above the Rim
    iight
    Your girl measured my dick size, said it's "bigger than Fresh its no lie"
    Only had one inch from the guy, now that 'Ex is ten she'll' start to question her life
    cool w/p..but is this saying fresh has a nine inch dick? thats how im reading it.. not much of a diss if so
    They put me vs an RB midtier, the matchup was insanity..
    Built ur home on a cheap site cuz nowhere else loved ya...so I'll end Habitat for Humanity
    little wordy but cool hit

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    shit gon' get violent, faggot.. peep the gore
    i will stab utilize fall out ya head and you can't use em too see no more
    feels a little corny n used but dont think ive seen it so okay hit
    these blows to ur head will devastate ur aura
    I'll leave you in a vegetative state.. and we ain't going to California
    meh ..okish
    you got creeper vibes going.. guarantee you rock a moustache
    but no doubt the girls u got locked up will eventually break out... in a rash
    i like the concept more then the bar but still cool
    he'll never reach new heights ex all about suckin
    his entire careers been an uphill battle Andes STILL Amountin to nothing..
    cool hit
    ur life is depressing, its a real shame bro
    you're so flat broke I mistook you for Artie Lange's nose
    lol alright
    this a pass for me, where im sending u you'll have time for some reflection
    i won't just knock you out the league exile beat you into another dimension
    cool


    v/fresh ..def came with the stronger hits here n was consistent

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    Re: LLL PLAYOFF RD1: Fresh vs Exalted OPEN 4 VOTES

    Fresh once you're down in votes PM Spree & Blue to get help quick...
    You'll shit the bed & we'll think fuck....why Duvets Cover em w/ that layer of protection?
    ^yeah looked it up and pronunciation is off
    Shoot you infront of ya crew for the shellshock then spray up ur circle..
    Things flash before their eyes while the 'Blast Processing' like an old Sega commercial
    ^not feeling
    If Zelph paid green for us to meet i'd KO this faggot clean off his feet..
    Fuck jail....I'll take Cookie Dough, Ball Up & beat to add something sweet to my sheet
    ^wack
    You take concepts & remix, but the wordplay comes out dumb as shit
    Dog everytime your wording hits a wall you 'Kill the Flip' like Pac in Above the Rim
    ^nah
    Your girl measured my dick size, said it's "bigger than Fresh its no lie"
    Only had one inch from the guy, now that 'Ex is ten she'll' start to question her life
    ^nice
    They put me vs an RB midtier, the matchup was insanity..
    Built ur home on a cheap site cuz nowhere else loved ya...so I'll end Habitat for Humanity
    ^dope



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    shit gon' get violent, faggot.. peep the gore
    i will stab utilize fall out ya head and you can't use em too see no more
    ^seen utilize before
    these blows to ur head will devastate ur aura
    I'll leave you in a vegetative state.. and we ain't going to California
    ^ehh
    you got creeper vibes going.. guarantee you rock a moustache
    but no doubt the girls u got locked up will eventually break out... in a rash
    ^set up was cool but not feeling the ending
    he'll never reach new heights ex all about suckin
    his entire careers been an uphill battle Andes STILL Amountin to nothing..
    ^ok
    ur life is depressing, its a real shame bro
    you're so flat broke I mistook you for Artie Lange's nose
    ^cool
    this a pass for me, where im sending u you'll have time for some reflection
    i won't just knock you out the league exile beat you into another dimension
    ^ok





    Fresh wins via jabs
    Last edited by plethora; January 31st, 2020 at 07:34 AM

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    Re: LLL PLAYOFF RD1: Fresh vs Exalted OPEN 4 VOTES

    Fresh once you're down in votes PM Spree & Blue to get help quick...
    You'll shit the bed & we'll think fuck....why Duvets Cover em w/ that layer of protection?
    I see what you were looking for..would have been a dope wordplay but if it worked the punch was still meh...so miss cos that aint how its pronounced
    Shoot you infront of ya crew for the shellshock then spray up ur circle..
    Things flash before their eyes while the 'Blast Processing' like an old Sega commercial
    cool concept but you dissed his team.. this was light
    If Zelph paid green for us to meet i'd KO this faggot clean off his feet..
    Fuck jail....I'll take Cookie Dough, Ball Up & beat to add something sweet to my sheet
    I fuck with this tbh
    You take concepts & remix, but the wordplay comes out dumb as shit
    Dog everytime your wording hits a wall you 'Kill the Flip' like Pac in Above the Rim
    This was basic but still had light impact
    Your girl measured my dick size, said it's "bigger than Fresh its no lie"
    Only had one inch from the guy, now that 'Ex is ten she'll' start to question her life
    nice...some of yall stupid
    They put me vs an RB midtier, the matchup was insanity..
    Built ur home on a cheap site cuz nowhere else loved ya...so I'll end Habitat for Humanity
    nice

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    shit gon' get violent, faggot.. peep the gore
    i will stab utilize fall out ya head and you can't use em too see no more
    Utilize been done man and i wasnt feeling this angle
    these blows to ur head will devastate ur aura
    I'll leave you in a vegetative state.. and we ain't going to California
    not a fan of this either man seemed basic
    you got creeper vibes going.. guarantee you rock a moustache
    but no doubt the girls u got locked up will eventually break out... in a rash
    This was light...creative on the rape creep shit but
    he'll never reach new heights ex all about suckin
    his entire careers been an uphill battle Andes STILL Amountin to nothing..
    i liked this..dope
    ur life is depressing, its a real shame bro
    you're so flat broke I mistook you for Artie Lange's nose
    lol i fuck with this
    this a pass for me, where im sending u you'll have time for some reflection
    i won't just knock you out the league exile beat you into another dimension
    dope


    So as of right now I got ex with like half a hit tho fresh's misses were better Im voting ex right now... Im'a come back just in case but for now

    V/Ex

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    Re: LLL PLAYOFF RD1: Fresh vs Exalted OPEN 4 VOTES

    Your girl measured my dick size, said it's "bigger than Fresh its no lie"
    Only had one inch from the guy, now that 'Ex is ten she'll' start to question her life
    They put me vs an RB midtier, the matchup was insanity..
    Built ur home on a cheap site cuz nowhere else loved ya...so I'll end Habitat for Humanity

    Above the rim could’ve been done better. It was worded soft

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    he'll never reach new heights ex all about suckin
    his entire careers been an uphill battle Andes STILL Amountin to nothing..
    ur life is depressing, its a real shame bro
    you're so flat broke I mistook you for Artie Lange's nose
    this a pass for me, where im sending u you'll have time for some reflection
    i won't just knock you out the league exile beat you into another dimension

    I think utilize could’ve been executed better, regardless of if its been done before. Break out could’ve been worded harsher.

    I got Fresh taking this one with better hits and attempts.

    v/Fresh

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