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Phonetic
Plata o Plomo
10 lines
Due in 48 hours
@Phonetic
you got 48hrs to get two voting links
thanks
@Plata o Plomo
Can I get a 24 hr extension for our battle?
Yeah fam, , 11:59pm est
*His username translates to Silver or Lead
Plomo’s nervous from the get go, tripping over bars as the critics swarm.
This faggot has no stage presence. One punch knocks him off his shaky Plat form.
POP wants his voice to be heard but shots crack skull all over the door mat.
Tongue and vocal chords on the carpet scattered so he’ll be Getting the Floor Back.
His slut’s got me on that speed dial and gets wet when I drop her texts
She fucks the Phone and cells vibrate with coverage all across her chest.
Face facts, your morning wood brings no Delight to her Afternoons.
You’re just a Poor excuse of a dude. No way she ever comes from Silver Spoons.
So no medals in your future bitch. The judges won’t even hesitate
You put Lead in your username but you’ll never be a heavy weight.
we had agreed on an extension. will post now
I've been unknown on the site until I close fist n let my ring strike this fucker,
a no name that pop ups on phone, and it's not a call from a private number.
that means pho kissin the ring, cause pho don't box and he hopes I stop
he make these voters fall asleep n miss his punches like boxing judges dozing off
choke him with his own chains till everyone yells dammit is he's dead
without visiting the custom jewelers, they saw plat knee em in the chest.
I'm swingin' around these giants hands. I'm a hitman who will sweep the top,
like abseilers on the Big Ben, get paid when I pull up and clean his clock.
He'll get taken to the coroner office before headin straight to the cementary with his ones,
All I gotta say another one is dead, and they'll pick up phone quicker than the morgue's secretary of the month
Plomo’s nervous from the get go, tripping over bars as the critics swarm.
This faggot has no stage presence. One punch knocks him off his shaky Plat form.
( I like the concept. the last phrase was iffy though .. one punch knocks him off his shaky platform isn't a great angle on the nameplay tho not feelin so much)
POP wants his voice to be heard but shots crack skull all over the door mat.
Tongue and vocal chords on the carpet scattered so he’ll be Getting the Floor Back.
(this angle was interesting. the execution is flawed again but its bearable . ok)
His slut’s got me on that speed dial and gets wet when I drop her texts
She fucks the Phone and cells vibrate with coverage all across her chest.
(lol the cells vibrate part but I love the coverage /chest shit )
Face facts, your morning wood brings no Delight to her Afternoons.
You’re just a Poor excuse of a dude. No way she ever comes from Silver Spoons.
(nahh)
So no medals in your future bitch. The judges won’t even hesitate
You put Lead in your username but you’ll never be a heavy weight.
(mm kinda light here)
I've been unknown on the site until I close fist n let my ring strike this fucker,
a no name that pop ups on phone, and it's not a call from a private number.
(took me 2 reads but I like this)
that means pho kissin the ring, cause pho don't box and he hopes I stop
he make these voters fall asleep n miss his punches like boxing judges dozing off
(lighhhhhhhht. angle was creative tho. tie ins there but evry predictable concept as I was reading it)
choke him with his own chains till everyone yells dammit is he's dead
without visiting the custom jewelers, they saw plat knee em in the chest.
(I pronounce it plat num. big miss)
I'm swingin' around these giants hands. I'm a hitman who will sweep the top,
like abseilers on the Big Ben, get paid when I pull up and clean his clock.
(ohhhhhhhhh the pull up part was the coolest tie in considering theconcept)
He'll get taken to the coroner office before headin straight to the cementary with his ones,
All I gotta say another one is dead, and they'll pick up phone quicker than the morgue's secretary of the month
(ok a bit longwinded tho)
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I got plat but phonetic keep at it ur concepts are coming around
v/plat
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Phonetic is taking the dq win
Plata posted 3 hrs past due time
