I'll Beat Your Ass Ft. Drama (Prod By Drama)

[C.Wrighter]

Chorus - Drama
verse 1 - Drama
verse 2 - Wrighter



THIS IS A SONG I FEATURED IN!!!!


HERES SONG

[SOUNDCLICK]9601764[/SOUNDCLICK]



FEED LINKS


http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...948/index.html


http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...891/index.html

[ViC.]

quality is not that good, 1st dude was garbage. chorus was annoying. beat was cool.
2nd dude: flow is ok, few lines seemed like they wore forced, lyrics were not so good. A lot of "shit and bitch". Gets annoying after a while. i have never heard your past music, so i dont know if u came weak. hope you can elevate and your boy too. if you disagree to what i put feel free to respond back ill try and explain better

[F. Lansky]

Im not really into this style of music but the beat was pretty good. I think the quality is decent. You guys should work on the flow though, thats the main thing i noticed. Try to ride the beat better.

[FrankV]

beat was decent at best, not to hard hitting
quality wasnt to good, chorus was ass..no hate i didnt like it
1st guy drops in..had iight lyrics.. delivery and swag need to be upped
flow was off at times but w/e..fuck this hook sucks
second dude sounded better, mic presence was better
lyrics were ight..decent track hit this up with feed please
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...790/index.html

[Possible]

The beat to me is, well, just ok to me...not something I would typically get on...

This first guy, I mean, i feel like he sounds very typical of what a lot of other guys are doing now. And as I hear it more and more I feel like its less and less original. The way he is saying the shit is comfortable and his own, but the style in general isn't. Bring something more to the table. This hook man, its gotta go homie. Its just not good to me man. Gets rather annoying before the little amount of time its even playing. The second verse is better than the first, in quality and bars, but still you are possessing the same exact style as the first dude to me. These to me are what I would address, however, if an artists carries a particular style it is not likely that will change to much to the point where you sound different. I kinda feel like its simple, and the concept is well, lets just say been around. I dont really know what you are trying to get out of rap or if you really are trying to be what you see/hear IE the style you guys have, if that is it then I apologize for my criticism, however. Its just not typically going to be something I personally would like to hear. I hope you take this with a grain of salt. peace.

[Dekken]

HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA, first dude made me laugh so hard

[Dekken]

cuz of that im not even playin anymore of it

[XM]

Niggas in VA still making songs like this? and Wrighter your from the 7 Cities? You should know better.....smdh

Let that south shit go, they already got people doing it, we east coast heads shiidddd...

[Dekken]

Niggas in VA still making songs like this? and Wrighter your from the 7 Cities? You should know better.....smdh

Let that south shit go, they already got people doing it, we east coast heads shiidddd...

werdddd

[TrackMob]

Vocals was way too loud, beat couldve been better. Seems like it was just thrown together but it was aight. Keep workin

[TrackMob]

Also u say Produced by Drama but isnt that a Vybe tag playin all throughout that track?

[XM]

It's a Vybe production i guess the mixing was done by Drama smh