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    I act to offend [revision]

    damn all this commotion people sayin im to serious and dont rap how i act if you think that...then get prepared to be blow away....literally

    *hook* finally my crazy side is out of the noose
    cause spears went back so they let me loose
    im hear to be shakin heads i mean all the disrespect
    f-u-c-k, thats my alphabet*

    verse 1*
    first things first i dominate
    i mean the hate, half all you mcs are fake.
    fake like most girls boobs
    dont act offened cause its probably you
    im hitler of rapping your the jew
    i just gassed your ass and if your fat youll get it to
    cause ur so big damn u cant even move
    go ahead and cry scream and even mope
    ill make it all better put your fingers down your throat
    damn all those twinki and ho ho could defloat a boat.
    and if you do this you wont be so blown up
    youll look grown up
    look at mary kate after she started to throw up wait hold up
    go ahead and tell were all goin to hell
    december 21st, two thousand twelve.
    and fuck the president.
    dont play me fuck his wife to mrs dick cheyne
    fuck you your junk just ask your wife she said i was good quick dick lick im done
    congratulations please take good care of my son HAHA

    *hook*
    finally my crazy side is out of the noose
    cause spears went back so they let me loose
    im hear to be shakin heads i mean all the disrespect
    f-u-c-k, thats my alphabet
    *

    verse 2*
    i know this is crazy and distant shit
    r kellys my hero he taught me how to piss on kids i wish he would get aquited from his felony
    then we can have a bunch of gay oj's runnin are country
    which is so reversed that mr oj is standing
    americas not messed up? didnt he get away with killin his family.
    well just his wife which is allright cause hes black and she is white
    interatial is worse then gays its just not right JK
    nothins worse then gays if were overpopulated itd be ok to kill one each day
    but wait all the do is suck so much dick
    w/e that means theres more chicks for me to pick out and
    have a one night stand
    call her the next days not part of my plan
    damn that is what fuels the fire
    i guess you didnt know im a pathalocial liar


    *hook* finally my crazy side is out of the noose
    cause spears went back so they let me loose
    im hear to be shakin heads i mean all the disrespect
    f-u-c-k, thats my alphabet*


    Verse 3

    I act to offend
    yeah back rappin again
    you thought i was nice
    now your like what happed to him
    reactin within cause these are offensive things
    dont get defensive im only sixteen
    which means im now a juvenile delinquent
    i had a good reputation
    but now i have shanked it and spanked it
    im flagrant shamin and to top it of im also degratin
    people wonder in life if ill ever make it
    even if i dont you know ill fake it i dont take shit
    friends are friends homies are people you make mistakes with
    man im stuck on this same rhyme justintime
    hear to be popin eyes and bustin every line
    hear to come up and fuck all the wives
    this aint a trick i make your skin itch like its smothered in HIVES


    *hook* finally my crazy side is out of the noose
    cause spears went back so they let me loose
    im hear to be shakin heads i mean all the disrespect
    f-u-c-k, thats my alphabet*
    Last edited by JUstintime; July 25th, 2008 at 11:14 PM
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    Re: I act to offend [revision]

    yeah dude it was offensive fo sho but i really didn't see anything cool about this peice. but hey, if you were looking to offend you did it.

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    Re: I act to offend [revision]

    holy shit thats a lotta links!

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    Re: I act to offend [revision]

    First uppin man check it out
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    Re: I act to offend [revision]

    Sorry, in my eyes, this shit was way off. Nothing interesting, too simplistic. No hate, just giving my point of view, my critism. Pick a topic, flow off it. Make it creative, feel it, detail it. Try to make your bars the same length, it makes the flow alot smoother. Just some advice, ya know, peace...

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    Re: I act to offend [revision]

    Quote Originally Posted by ...Surgical... View Post
    Sorry, in my eyes, this shit was way off. Nothing interesting, too simplistic. No hate, just giving my point of view, my critism. Pick a topic, flow off it. Make it creative, feel it, detail it. Try to make your bars the same length, it makes the flow alot smoother. Just some advice, ya know, peace...
    fuck, was gonna read it all the other day, the topic and flow throu me off and said fuck it.... yea, ur flow terrible and so is ur topic

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    Re: I act to offend [revision]

    you guys dont know the fuckin flow wow what pussy ass cunt twat ass fuckin bitch ass fake mcs rap about gay shit mother fuckin fags fuckin bann me i dont use this damn site any more hahah FUCK RB.com its all fake mcs like fereal all your guys stuff is the same gay old deep shit that makes no sense what the FUCK
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    Re: I act to offend [revision]

    you guys dont know the fuckin flow wow what pussy ass cunt twat ass fuckin bitch ass fake mcs rap about gay shit mother fuckin fags fuckin bann me i dont use this damn site any more hahah FUCK RB.com its all fake mcs like fereal all your guys stuff is the same gay old deep shit that makes no sense what the FUC
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    Re: I act to offend [revision]

    you guys dont know the fuckin flow wow what pussy ass cunt twat ass fuckin bitch ass fake mcs rap about gay shit mother fuckin fags fuckin bann me i dont use this damn site any more hahah FUCK RB.com its all fake mcs like fereal all your guys stuff is the same gay old deep shit that makes no sense what the FU
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    Re: I act to offend [revision]

    you guys dont know the fuckin flow wow what pussy ass cunt twat ass fuckin bitch ass fake mcs rap about gay shit mother fuckin fags fuckin bann me i dont use this damn site any more hahah FUCK RB.com its all fake mcs like fereal all your guys stuff is the same gay old deep shit that makes no sense what the F
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    Re: I act to offend [revision]

    you guys dont know the fuckin flow wow what pussy ass cunt twat ass fuckin bitch ass fake mcs rap about gay shit mother fuckin fags fuckin bann me i dont use this damn site any more hahah FUCK RB.com its all fake mcs like fereal all your guys stuff is the same gay old deep shit that makes no sense what the FUCK!
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    Re: I act to offend [revision]

    you guys dont know the fuckin flow wow what pussy ass cunt twat ass fuckin bitch ass fake mcs rap about gay shit mother fuckin fags fuckin bann me i dont use this damn site any more hahah FUCK RB.com its all fake mcs like fereal all your guys stuff is the same gay old deep shit that makes no sense what the FUCK!!
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    Re: I act to offend [revision]

    you guys dont know the fuckin flow wow what pussy ass cunt twat ass fuckin bitch ass fake mcs rap about gay shit mother fuckin fags fuckin bann me i dont use this damn site any more hahah FUCK RB.com its all fake mcs like fereal all your guys stuff is the same gay old deep shit that makes no sense what the FUCKE
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