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    Mysterious ways; God moves

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    Mysterious ways; God moves


    God moves in a mysterious way
    His wonders to perform;
    He plants His footsteps in the sea,
    And rides upon the storm.

    Deep in unfathomable mines
    Of never-failing skill
    He treasures up His bright designs,
    And works His sovereign will.

    Ye fearful saints, fresh courage take,
    The clouds ye so much dread
    Are big with mercy, and shall break
    In blessings on your head.

    Judge not the Lord by feeble sense,
    But trust Him for His grace;
    Behind a frowning providence
    He hides a smiling face.

    His purposes will ripen fast,
    Unfolding every hour;
    The bud may have a bitter taste,
    But sweet will be the flower.

    Blind unbelief is sure to err,
    And scan his work in vain;
    God is His own interpreter,
    And He will make it plain
    .


    Plain and Simple
    The thought of ever-last,
    is plain and simple to the ear.
    It actually holds more it casts,
    to the ones who believe over fear.

    Treasure the time you have,
    cause in due time; your turn is up.
    surpass depression and make it fast,
    before the withered time slams the door shut.

    Reluctant past times not to be bothered,
    or even the thought of it to be done.
    wrap it up with ease and make sure it's covered,
    or it might creep it in the midst of the sun.

    Gloomy day's
    so i put the pen down
    -just for one second
    but in the snap of a finger,
    everything changed...oh so fast.
    Wait-
    Weight-

    Seems the same to me,
    when my wrists puts some elbow into it.
    -if you know what i mean....
    So i give it a go-figure smile,
    and mend with the situation thats at hand.
    Playing dumb will not get you anywhere.
    That my friend is a true fact,
    and upon it i shall hold you dear.
    I close the book of crystal clear,
    and let the reflection of time graze of my thoughts.
    -for my readers to understand me more.
    He helped me in due time,
    your time will come.... just be patient.

    Mysterious ways; God moves
    so let the good times roll...
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    Re: Mysterious ways; God moves

    Word open for feed leave links and I will get to them.

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    Re: Mysterious ways; God moves

    real deep man very moving............................................ ...........................

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    Re: Mysterious ways; God moves

    ^^wtf...your just going around saying that shit to everything...i guess man thanks.
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    Re: Mysterious ways; God moves

    DAMN trhis was nice.
    IM not a real poetic person but I feel inspired to write one now after seeing this.
    It all flowed well and the rhhyme scheme was nice and unqiue to my eyes. Mr. write i like how you intro'ed it as plain and simple as it gives some begining emotion to it. Wordz i really liked your part i liked how it described it at the beg i can see the superb imagery put in it.
    God moves in a mysterious way
    His wonders to perform;
    He plants His footsteps in the sea,
    And rides upon the storm.

    That part i really lied. The emotion was there too but i liked the imagery better.
    so overall this was a great peice maybe hof worthy ima have to read it agian to assure this.
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    Re: Mysterious ways; God moves

    thanks man we really appreciate yoru time man..thanks
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    Re: Mysterious ways; God moves

    Thanks my dude open for more feed.

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    Re: Mysterious ways; God moves

    Ha! dam.

    This was a well writen piece, I have seen very few people that pulled off an collab like you two did. Wordz emotive werds and writes appropriate and manipulative usage of vocab gave room for alot of imagination an both of you had a splice of creative and original metaphors. I was a little confused about the last part, I was wondering did you forget to finsh, but for a well writen piece I doubt ou'l make such mistake so I just wen't along wih it, thanks for pming me man, this was deffinently worth the read.

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    Re: Mysterious ways; God moves

    This was good. I'm not a very poetic person either. I rarely check this section of RB and this is definately my first poem collab to read... and I like it. You both worked nicely together, I enjoyed it all.

    The bud may have a bitter taste,
    But sweet will be the flower

    &

    Wait-
    Weight-
    Seems the same to me,
    when my wrists puts some elbow into it.

    Are a couple of my favs... When my wrists puts some elbow into it... I really like that... Nice job guys

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    Re: Mysterious ways; God moves

    thanks man really appreciate your time
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    Re: Mysterious ways; God moves

    Thanks Domain for the feed..

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    Re: Mysterious ways; God moves

    Closed, Wordz. bit his part
    A few achievements here and there

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