10 lines
due in 30
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10 lines
due in 30
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okay checkin in.
well he told me to set it up .. but then he [signs off]
probably just realized that his [lines are soft]
i guess it must of been a little past his bedtime
"This Just In K.O'in the Prince" reads the headline
cuz this is like the UT upset, i'm pullin out the impossible
puttin you ass in shock, betta get ya rushed to the hospital.
you above water.. well now it's your time to drown
you did all the soul searching you could .. but nothing was found.
the punches you throw did nothing but missed
you just a frog waiting to get kissed*
* name is Prince. enough said
he told me to set it .. but i guess he's offline .. so whenever he sees it he'll check in and spit.
You must be crazy, This Just In testin?/
My lyrical smiff wessons will give dis kid a lesson wit more headshots den Karrine Steffans*/
Prince is reppin so when i spit don't eye the heater/
or ya girl i treat her like prison football, she come in a tight end but leave a wide reciever/
Are you finally convinced im nice, you payin a wicked price/
for steppin in the booth ima have to choke you wit ya tie and force feed you kryptonite*/
cause the shit you write is fucking trash so spittin 10 was uneccesary/
Prince's punches are Steve Smith cause they leave more holes then the Bears' secondary/
So for misstepping to Esco i'll let the tech blow on my way to a big win/
while your on your way to the grave plot that ima leave"This Just" in/
*=Explanations
Karrine Steffans is the chick they call Super Head
His sig says he's superman when he enters the booth, his weakness is kryptonite
Laying face down in the mainstream.Po.Ethics.
Upping for votes, lets get this jumping off, 1luv.
Laying face down in the mainstream.Po.Ethics.
ight uppin.
Ayo i will return favors, hit this battle up, 1luv.
Laying face down in the mainstream.Po.Ethics.
Yo, easy battle son.
This just in, you didnt have much to give, your lines were boring, ur punchlines were off and didnt hit directly. You verse didnt show much appeal and imo, i dont like your style. Prince, the 2nd line in each of ur bar's were a little stretched. other than that, you did fine.
V/ - Prince.
ummmm... i kinda .... welll this shit is hard...... ummmm... both good jobs..... votes though.... ummm...
v/prince
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"My poems come from the heart, like "Heart Attacks", ....Serious"
Wow prince got my vote
This Just In
ya had a good verse, some good punches
but a couple lines in ur verse were weak
ya had some good concepts also
yo best punch
cuz this is like the UT upset, i'm pullin out the impossible
puttin you ass in shock, betta get ya rushed to the hospital.
vs
Prince
ya came out harder wit punches
good verse both of ya had good vocab
anywayz your best punch was
Are you finally convinced im nice, you payin a wicked price/
for steppin in the booth ima have to choke you wit ya tie and force feed you kryptonite*/
for the reason above Prince gets my vote good battle you 2 and no hate
return the favor fairly and hit up my battle as i did yours - and please make the vote FAIR
This was a Decent Battle........
Im gonna have to give it to Prince.......
You both were pretty consistant with your punches
but Esco had more stronger punches an personals along
with better word-play you both had pretty good flow an structure.............
Vote- Esco
Nice Battle..........
Not Hatin Just Votin..........
nothing
vs.
You must be crazy, This Just In testin?/
My lyrical smiff wessons will give dis kid a lesson wit more headshots den Karrine Steffans*/
^^^lmao @ that punch
V/esco easily
vswell he told me to set it up .. but then he [signs off]
probably just realized that his [lines are soft]
i guess it must of been a little past his bedtime
"This Just In K.O'in the Prince" reads the headline
You must be crazy, This Just In testin?/
My lyrical smiff wessons will give dis kid a lesson wit more headshots den Karrine Steffans*/punches - tjiAre you finally convinced im nice, you payin a wicked price/
for steppin in the booth ima have to choke you wit ya tie and force feed you kryptonite
personals - prince
structure - tji
creativity - tji
flow - prince
overall i was just feelin tj's verse more
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Thanks all ya'll 4 the votes will return favors, 1luv.
Laying face down in the mainstream.Po.Ethics.
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