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    ~Living In The Dark~

    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...92#post3444592
    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...11#post3444611


    Buried Alive
    Leading a normal day,remaning on to my usual way
    good feelings cave,something unusual sparks today
    until violently im jerked astray,tied up and takin away
    fearfully brought out of the trunk opening my eyes...........
    ..............my face turns gray.................
    two men restrain me back,until i feel impact of a painful smack
    hit my knees eyes rolling back until my mind goes black

    ~Awakening~
    slowly recooperating adjusting to the barriers that are surrounding
    mind cloudy limbs loosly bounded,body aches, heads pounding
    Fuzzy eyes open wide body shaking with tremendous fear
    scrambling to move thoughts racing........... "why am i here"
    body inclosed completely trapped unsure of how to escape
    breaking the tape i pound the case; suddenly im afraid
    what if im locked tight,with no light till insanity kills me
    telling myself to keep trying.....
    still might be a chance,scraping violenty aggression fills me
    it must break no barriers can remained locked forever
    nothing gets better trying to remain calm trying to remember
    again a surge of death inlightens me beginning to scream and sware
    mistakenly realizing with each outburst i become short of air
    what has happened to me, why am caged unaware of my remains
    body going insane,spread with pain,yet this grave remains the same
    Hours Pass on body growing weak
    try to yell,but i can barely speak
    all of a sudden a thought hits my mind at a quick glance
    i need clues?...quickly searching my pants
    inlightend i find my cellphone excitment burns out my depression
    dialing 911....no sound? i look and check; heart drops.......
    ...............NO CONNECTION................
    searching with the light from my phone for anything absurd
    something grabbing my eye, pulls me to this clump on my shirt
    looking around, i noticed that in this case was a thin layer of dirt
    hitting me almost instantly, i raise hell kicking up a stale cough
    scratching at the thick layer,agonizing as my nails rip off
    bleeding, suffocating to death i fall back in a mess
    trapped awaiting death,close my eyes breathing less
    completey buried by the earth,tightly sealed around
    nothing i can do but die,finally realizing my end............
    ...........starts underground

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    ayyo thnx for the feedbak man.

    i was feelin this topic man, shit was kinda dope.
    but only concern i got if u record this, ya flow and delivery would sound kinda off man.
    but what ya wrote kept me readin man and interestin and shit.
    yo i wanna see what else ya got, Nastillmatic90 is my sn, lets chat man. peace

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    shits hot boy...like this ish alot ... stay up one

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    thanx 4 the fb

    last up 4 this piece

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