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    The Biggest Gang;

    "Training alone will not aid you, you must overcome the fear of dying" ProfessionAl, words of wisdom..........



    Try this on for size, a new bit called The Biggest Gang, check it...........

    if its war we goin all out. strong and deadly
    whatevers ahead we. march in step because-
    were all soldiers in this game of life
    we only live once, so the hype and price is right.

    reppin' thier band, tribe or armies grippin berettas,
    listin' their members. killin off all the offenders,
    Remember back in 1929 when they started pretendin'?
    with the great depression. using money for missions.

    top secret military projects and shit. buildin wierd objects,
    to lob into space for a star quest. Nostradomus,
    did you predict things like this would happen?
    government scandals, police raidin and takin action.

    its all the same since the dawn if imperialism.
    cerial killers. who perfom murders with theories and wisdom.
    death in numbers. some call it a sacrifice,
    great generals. give lifes for the sake of senseless fights.

    battlefields. filled with dead bodies and such,
    too much blood that rushes. medics wont touch it,
    bustin the earth with tanks bombs and aeroplanes,
    population leveler. death in a war thats vain.

    psychopathic leaders dealing with peoples fates,
    playin their games, 2005 years and it still a'int changed.
    remaining the same. speakin in language, to some is slang,
    i swear to god the governements' the biggest fuckin GANG
    for real!...........




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    heres my thoughts....

    I really liked this piece because I agree with what your saying pro. The government is a bigger gang then crips man. Bush is out of control especially with the patriot act. But skill wise Im gonna have to say you need a lil work. you lacked multis but i think thats just because there were some things you wanted to say that you couldnt if you put them in every bar. Maybe throw some word play in there or somethin to keep it interesting for others. Besides that I think this piece was really good and you should keep droppin and elevating. Im bout to drop a piece so try and peep and and give feedback pz

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    This was deep and I cant even attempt to say if there was
    anything wrong because it went with what you were sayin,
    that is either genious or dumb luck, but people would be surprised
    at how many times those come into play together.
    very good piece, and keep bringin it man.
    ~Ashy~
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    uppin this............................some serious shit here

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