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I'm tha "serial killa" of dis *RAP SHIT*, leavin niggaz in "*CASKETS*", wut u kno about triggaz and *GAT SLIPS* when u ain't *CAP SHIT*::Ya shit's *PLASTIC*, ma shit's tha "grade-A-quality"
I'm spittin bars so hot Nas and "J(Jay-Z)-wanna- follow-me"::
You don't need a "life"boat ta float *ontop-of-tha-water* (dead bodies float)::
I'm like Powerpuff Girl blankets, cuz I'm *ontop-of-ya-daughter*::
I'm a P.I.M.P. and *I love it*::
Spell it backwards (P.M.I.P.) and dat's u, 'P'ussy 'M'asturbatin *'I'n 'P'ublic*::
I'm straight *BUCKIN' CATS*, and u about ta be tha next *CHUMP I CAP*::
Even "ur boys" were like "Dark Contempt ......who tha *FUCK IS DAT*?"::
Good *LUCK IN RAP*, cuz believe me it's *needed*::
Ain't no way you're beatin me nigga, cuz I'm *undefeated*::I got u *SLITTIN' YA WRISTS* cuz I got INFAMOUS SPITZ* dat's *GITTIN YA PISSED* like Ike while *HITTIN HIS BITCH* (Tina Turner's husband, Ike abused her)::You're *WISHIN' YOU'RE SICK*, but ain't no way u *WINNIN' DIS SHIT
You better run along now funny Lil Wayne
im only 17 but lyrically hit you wit my cane
cuz my words'll come upon you like the swiftest rain
my vision burn in ya skull will make you mezmorotically insane
so when you see me run home and motha fuckin pray
cuz potentially every word i say can shatter ur vertibray
funny you battlin me ,your full of foolish plots and thoughts
im usin all sorts of techniques on you to give you blood clots
but with this knife ill help you bleed and play connect the dots
1 dot 2 dot 3 dot 4 oh holy shit man you got alot of fuckin blood on the floor
but when im done you wont be able to scream no more
but i guess too many thoughts are runnin through ya head now
but the only thought that should be there is "TO DEFEAT DARK CONTEMPT,HOW?"
so yo ill give you alittle fact on how to defeat me
you cant my words will hit you harder then a fuckin pedigree
alright lil wayne i think this battle is done ya know i cant say this hasn't bin fun
but i can see in ya face your about to black out from all the pain son
so ill let you in on alittle secret so you dont have to watch the rerun
in the end it was you who fell and it was me who won
uppppppppppppppppin
yo guy i just want the opinions for wut i have to work on so if this herb one its all good
yo Wayne good battle i wanna hear wut you think about the verses
what are you talkin about me im a king check out the sig
:drink: nice battle
yo it was a decent battle but wut do you think about the verses i know my rhyme was kinda weak so i'd like other peoples opinion on wut i should work on to make my rhymes better wut you think i should do
how bout we battle again and you just step it up you can set it up now
you started hard but by the end it got weak
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Wayne- I'm in love wit' your flow man....punchlinez were crazy.metaphors were crazy....makin' stupid shit sound funny was crazy!!! This was a hot drop even tho' i haven't peeped any of your past battles...keep it up man shit is hot! 9/10
Dark Contempt- Your opening bar was weak causing me to be very hesitant on reading the whole thing... But i pulled through man, and i came up with the decision that it is imperative that you come harder on every single battle verse you right in your life...But it was a nice try homie....you live and you learn! 7/10
V/ Dat nigga wayne cuz He a King
this was a very weak battle but dark contempt wins becuze he was actually original and wasnt talking bout guns in his whol verse niethor of u had good punches or personals wayne u had a couple ok multis but nuttin special niether had great flow or structure u both need a lot of work
v/dark contempt
Say wha??
aight then yo wayne you up for a topic battle....
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