Hey Maven

[Na~Ledge]

Your right I am a topical guy... hate diss verses....but u suck at them too

This kid is scary, the very adverse of legendary
Fuck a simile...........this passage IS ur obituary
Hard lyrics concave ur rib cage, dicompose dudes vest
Then have medics doing push-ups on ur careers chest
In retrospect maybe I shouldn't come across so murderous
I mean the kids only 16, and I don't need the stress.....
.....from child protective services
Scrolled through your diss for some decent material to counter with
And was inflicted with writer's block......
.........case dude didn't say shit
Offered jeers over my age, said I should have elevated more
I've been on RB's for two months, whats ur excuse.......
...you've been on over 24
Yes i come intellectual at times, you counfuse it as played
But I ain't trippin...younggin's a teen, so he's just actin his age
My lyrics contain supernatural spirt, s'why I' well above this kid
And shouldn't be so surprise when a line or two goes over his head
So what my punches were old? Don't mean that I can't rhyme
Ur crews wack and I ain't Cleo..........why give u my hot lines?
True you USED to be ill, but what have you really done recently
Ur flows a fornight on furlow..............
......... easily two week for me
So run ur little ass to the corner with the rest of WORDPERFECT
.........And consider was a mother fuckin name honestly worth it


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http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=180932
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show....php?p=2213765

[Na~Ledge]

Honestly this shit is getting out of hand, and boring. So after the topical battle with Phrantick ( which has nothing to do with anyone but me) I'm done. I hate diss verses and don't feel like wasting every other day replying to one so after this hit me up in front lines or something if its that crucial. Cause this shit isn't abouit writing anymore . Its dumb fake gangsta internet beef. So I'm Outti.

*shakes his head* Fuck! I'm a fuckin topical writer.

[Johnny 6-feet]

some pretty good punches in here man, are you syre you aint a battler? my sentiments exaxtly on the 'played beef' man. a solid diss piece, what more can i say?

hit for me up for a collab sometime.

hit'n'run..

[djb]

lol you killed this kid. seriously. i know how you feel i hate writing diss's and battle verses also. i just cant think that way. topicals are more fun for me i dunno. but you came off really well here. this was the best diss in the beef so far. nice work man.

[Na~Ledge]

^I agree topical are better. And this beef thing is stupid, who's benefiting. They got the name back, word changed his, no big deal. Fucked up cause some of them dudes are pretty nice. But whatever. Anyway thinks for peepin it fam.

[_-~Ill~-_]

killed him big time dawg...hes 6 feet under man....
DOPE

[Maven.]

haha, the title of my thread was referring to me as the topical kid, not you. Mine was the first diss verse I've ever written, I think.

This kid is scary, the very adverse of legendary
Fuck a simile...........this passage IS ur obituary

I liked that as an opener...

I also liked the two week line. I dunno, you threw a lot of filler in in places. Even so, decent comeback.
Anyways, unless my crew is collabing on a diss, which I'm not sure we are, I probably won't be writing any more of these either.

[Na~Ledge]

^same here, thanks for the feed. No hard feelings. Out.

[Na~Ledge]

And thought u wre talkin bout me in the title of ur diss. lol.