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  1. #1
    NinoScar
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    Lightbulb DEEP SHIT (please peep this one)

    This one is dedicated to God, listen to us baby...

    i never labeled myself a thug, hardcore or a rebel.
    but give me a gun and a vest and i go to war wit the devil
    pop led in his head and take ova the earth.
    shit, if i got beef wit satan im takin ova his turf.
    cuz My dreams is shattered, my life is worst.
    and when i look out my window at night it hurts.
    and everytime i close my eyes to rest my vision
    i see a grim future, either death or prision.
    cuz im from the "island of death" this is the nation of slums.
    all we have is ambition and a facination wit gunz.
    all i see is fiendz, smokers and stoners
    and crooked cops copin' coke at the corner.
    cops that sniff the white while they out on patrol.
    they get paid by the killaz so the block is out of control.
    shootin niggaz in they head right in front of they moms.
    put the weight up on their bread now they labled a don.
    cuz its easy to get up in the game
    but its hard to stay alive, stay protectin your fame.
    they'll take everything, exept for your name.
    this is Puerto Rico even the best could get slain.
    take a look at the youth, look at the pain in their eyes.
    cuz they 16 year olds, and they already took about 16 lives.
    their mothers overdosed on about 16 lines.
    and their pops got shot up, about 16 times.
    and his brotha is doin time, about 16 years.
    so everyday he smokin blunts and drink about 16 beers
    pour some liqor on the corner cuz he lost about 16 peers
    on a driveby shootin' to take ova the 16th block.
    they had automatic rifles while he held the 16 shot.
    my grandfather told me, "you see them niggaz right there?"
    they dead cuz drugs a game, and they dont play fair."
    thats why i aint tryin to be left on the sidewalk wit my brains exposed.
    i just open a notebook grab a pen and let my thoughts explode
    this where i let my pain unload.
    i keep heat close to me cuz this pain is cold.
    im tryin to get my heart back cuz my heart just froze.
    i have no friends cuz they aint easy to set appart from foes.

    This is about my experience growin up in Puerto Rico. i just keystyled this to Noreaga's "Bloody Money" beat. cunstructive feedback is appreaciated, hatred is not.... PeACE

  2. #2
    Damani-DaGrinch
    Guest
    nice ass drop...... you constantly elevatin nigga....i really liked this part
    take a look at the youth, look at the pain in their eyes.
    cuz they 16 year olds, and they already took about 16 lives.
    their mothers overdosed on about 16 lines.
    and their pops got shot up, about 16 times.
    and his brotha is doin time, about 16 years.
    so everyday he smokin blunts and drink about 16 beers
    pour some liqor on the corner cuz he lost about 16 peers
    on a driveby shootin' to take ova the 16th block.
    they had automatic rifles while he held the 16 shot.

    siccness.....fo sho

    dis shit was pretty tight too

    shootin niggaz in they head right in front of they moms.
    put the weight up on their bread now they labled a don.
    cuz its easy to get up in the game
    but its hard to stay alive, stay protectin your fame.
    they'll take everything, exept for your name.
    this is Puerto Rico even the best could get slain


    kepp spittin nigga.....and peep somma mah shit
    peace out

  3. #3
    StillinStylez
    Guest
    Yo...its aight...too emotional though..but its all good.

    keep postin

    peaz

  4. #4
    Simplicity
    Guest
    i was feelin that..
    you came off wild nice on that verse and the same spot that damani was feelin, was also my favorite..
    do ya thing and check my newest..

  5. #5
    Dat_Nigga_D_aKa_$o$a
    Guest
    i was feeling dat cuz u know i be feeling dat same shyt

    best part: cuz My dreams is shattered, my life is worst.
    and when i look out my window at night it hurts.
    and everytime i close my eyes to rest my vision
    i see a grim future, either death or prision.

  6. #6
    JKnowledge
    Guest

    Real Deep

    Yo man, that was TIGHT. I'm really feelin your flow. That is the kinda shit that people gotta hear. None of that Bling Bling glamorizin the shit.

  7. #7
    DeJureThaRaw
    Guest
    yeah tyte, I cant talk bad bout it cuz its bout god...Thats always a good responce getter, yeah tyte

  8. #8
    [*¤ÐîMêØñФ* ]
    Guest
    Damn Boo,
    Mos def some deep ish here ...
    Diggin ya style no doubt!

    Keep it real ,
    Head up!

    pz
    ~1~

  9. #9
    ForeiGnChamBer
    Guest
    dope multis and shit, get into audio !

  10. #10
    NinoScar
    Guest
    Yo, thanx everyone for there thoughts and uppins.Its defenetly comin back to ya. i'm workin on puttin this shit on audio. If it comes out smooth enough i might just lay it down at the audio forum. But ima defenetly keep on layin keystyles here though...

    One

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