Physical!!!!!!!!!!

[Lady Redd]

Physical Back on tha beat yea i'm back on tha street,
Hoes hate me so i'm back on tha beef,
Still stay crunk i'm a soufside G that'll break yo jaw and knock out yo teeth,
Swang and reach i'mma swang and reach and bob and weave everything u swing,
Fuck wit me my team got beams and calicos to make u scream,
Know what i mean when its on its on,
Make a nigga cry like a Jay-Z song,
On my own and still stay strong when i'm aggravated but i look calm,
And i'm bout to blow jus' like a bomb from Vietnam and bring sum harm,
I smoke moe weed then cheech and chong so i know that my muthafuckin conscience gone,
Think i'm wrong then fuck u bitch Lady Redd gone touch this bitch,
Pistol play we got that shit bustin hallotips and extended clips,
Get in tha way den we gon go jab 4 jab nigga blow 4 blow,
Throwin bows fuckin up these hoes upper cut her wit tha left if she move 2 slow,
Face full of blood when she hit tha flo then screamed like a bitch "I don't want no moe",
Then she dropped, her left eye closed, picture perfect fucked up pose,
Neva had no love 4 those niggaz who wanna turn friend 2 foe,
So join the church get spiritual cause off in tha souf its physical,

(A Lil Crunk Piece I Came Up Wit)

[Seminole]

Dam Ma....Must we be so violent, lol.

You got some aight multies in there. Try to condense those longer lines a lil bit. Get ya vocab up to, and get those punchlines, similies and metas down pat. I kno u from the south and shit but, try to find somethin better to flow about cuz that "I'ma beat yo azz" and "I got gunz" shit is played. Thats wut the radio is for. Check out some of the tutorials and stuff. You had some ok lines and u got potential as well.

[CrazyCarl]

This verse was alright, you had some ok ideas. Keep workin on the wordplay, and keep that up. You could structure this better to help the flow, edit the line lengths a little bit. Choose a topic that you can go in detail about.
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[Johnny 6-feet]

a played to death concept to be honest, your vocab needs some work and some multis would really help the flow along. you managed to get across the aggression though, DAMN, lol.

keep posting and elavating.

[Mistral]

You need to leave 2 links to 2 open mics that you left decent feedback on or this gets closed, Thanks.

[ThaShauman]

I smoke moe weed then cheech and chong so i know that my muthafuckin conscience gone,

^^your best part

everyone hit two areas on the head "vocab & played out lyrics" ma i can see you got talent but do like me when i had no life as a kid lol i read da dictionary... seems retarded but yo vocab can get you a long way, secondly find you a topic that you can spit about rather than "murda murda kill kill i smoke green n got money"

im from da souf & i honestly cant stand all that..

over all im feelin you though ma... keep em comin