any comments?
(to the Get Crunk Musik beat)
Im highly regarded as one of tha games best,
protect yah chest, nuttin less,
when u see that tec,
the gun spits quick so u betta step,
u got 2 strikes the thirds gon leave yah body wrecked,
games r made to be played,
but not wit me homie...
that mouth keep runnin yah family gon be real lonely,
and i live for the pain,
blickas scare yo brain,
u a damn shame...i dont even rememba yah name...
Last edited by tklegend; January 17th, 2005 at 05:27 PM
-Tha Legend aka Young Killah-
well you need to elevate get better subjects to spit about and go deeper into the topic it seemed a little simple to me but stay up homie and elevate
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=165915
^^^hit this shit up man
Naw ^ This shit was koo. I like flows like that keep it up!
Hit my site up to
~Lil Preview~
Last edited by Lil'Young; January 17th, 2005 at 08:02 PM
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Work on cutting down the long lines, some were stretched. Keep writing and you'll think of better topics.
To basic... work on ur structure and flow, some lines were stretched...this was nothin new, try choosin a different topic next time... nothin much to say about this, keep writin n u'll elevate...
You need to leave 2 links to 2 open mics that you left decent feedback on or this gets closed, Thanks.
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