New female my frist 16's

[MizAlizé]

My first post just a lil something

Im that Alize mixed with henney be that Thug Passion bitches slow they reaction/
Clock~back blastin cock~sack bustin casue niggas nuts aint be nothing but action/

Imagine How these chicks claim bad~bitches Jeaslik and I had~riches we bad bitches/
Seattle~chick got bitches rattled~quick niggas do my work haters be found in ditches/

Bitch talk wack Im like run~that aint playin where da gun~at its gonna be sun shine/
When ya blood~splat The flows like water so im'a flood~Cat these chicks out of time/

My flames~get~blazed by a bitch never that I hit hard dames~get~dazed bitch amazed/
I roll~up chicks belive i swoll~up lips bitch buggin the glock leave ya smokin glazed/

Like coke~n~weed take a hit feel ya thaort~n~bleed i wanna see blood commin out/
gush~n~out spit it out push~ma~sprout in the game im gonna defeat any girl coming out/

Yes i get~it~poppin Fuck what ya say when a hater get~to~talkin i stay popppin wit hits/
Understand I cast like hex on that voo~doo shit bitches be spitin that boo~boo shit/

Weak~as~what bring ya man around me i'll gonna skeet~n~fuck many boys love dis clit/
Learn~ma~name Alize im gonna earn~ma~game too this shit belive im 730 a bitch quick to filp/

Im gonna hold~it~down my games royal like poker fold~a~clown i shut shit down/
Spiting nothing but hot sweet 16's rhymes like magic acts belive i'll truly joke a clown/

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[Jae Silk]

hot shit girl

Weak~as~what bring ya man around me i'll gonna skeet~n~fuck many boys love dis clit/
Learn~ma~name Alize im gonna earn~ma~game too this shit belive im 730 a bitch quick to filp/

i liked that

[Vikkie™]

nice your structure needs work.........maybe its those ~ you used but lyrically wise it was nice.....wordplay good...flow good...concept good i liekd it good job keep doin it

[Kill.]

i dont got much to say about it, but i liked it good flow great drop

[Facts Machine]

this was decent but bad structure and try upping your vocab and pick up more creative concepts instead of typical ones. u had some good multis. so keep at it.