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Da Ill'est
Anomaly
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Check..........................Originally Posted by Anomaly
check fam... ill drop in bout 30 min,
holla-actcha
Look.. listen to me for a min..
I know you done heard the rumors.. how Da Illest put it 'down'
This cats says he can rap, .......i'll smack him 'around'
My flow so comfortable 'man'.. I write so tight............I pull muscle's in my 'hand'
You need to quit nursery 'rhyming'....... Yah girl on my nuts like a Hershey with 'Almonds'
Im crazy, my pistol will 'spark-yah'... and leave yah with more lead then a pencil 'sharpner'
My raps 'sicker'... i smoke L's and throw back 'Liquior'
.......... Yah rhymes is doo doo, thats why they get shit on like cat 'litter'
Man, Im a 'monster'....... Thats why i got yah gurl on my tail like the tag on my 'boxers'
Im'a keep doing dirt till im under 'some'...... Yah flow is 'dumb'
........... So get out yah pencil and write till yah 'thumb' is 'num'
you up fam.. g-luck
The doc told illest he was "Hot" in his forehead and he thought illest was typical
till Illest took it the wrong way...joined a football team just to get a physical (Turn your head and cough...get it)
His girl was sick he did her while she was asleep then atracted syphilis
Damn that sucks bro...but no wonder they call you da ill'est
In the future check for signs of std's,sluts, cheaters and transys
Your girl wasnt a chick...her fuckin name was ANDY
ingnorance is bliss till you end up in the hospital for the shit
he peed in a cup for a std test...he got his name from his piss(Da ill'est)
That shits just tragic and to top it off your whole rep is destroyed
Fuckin a dude, getting a std…wat else can your dignity avoid
up we need some votes in this please..............
da-
I know you done heard the rumors.. how Da Illest put it 'down'
This cats says he can rap, .......i'll smack him 'around'
* very basic, nothing new to me
My flow so comfortable 'man'.. I write so tight............I pull muscle's in my 'hand'
You need to quit nursery 'rhyming'....... Yah girl on my nuts like a Hershey with 'Almonds'
NO STARS Self glorification and bad or lack of rhyming kill this
Im crazy, my pistol will 'spark-yah'... and leave yah with more lead then a pencil 'sharpner'
NO STARS this is wak, makes no good points, bad flow, unoriginal
My raps 'sicker'... i smoke L's and throw back 'Liquior'
.......... Yah rhymes is doo doo, thats why they get shit on like cat 'litter'
NO STARS because you said doo doo, and thats just sad
Man, Im a 'monster'....... Thats why i got yah gurl on my tail like the tag on my 'boxers'
** unoriginal but aight similie, word it better though
Im'a keep doing dirt till im under 'some'...... Yah flow is 'dumb'
........... So get out yah pencil and write till yah 'thumb' is 'num'
NO STARS horrible finisher, learn to write son
an-
The doc told illest he was "Hot" in his forehead and he thought illest was typical
till Illest took it the wrong way...joined a football team just to get a physical
* parentheticals make yo bars weak dog
His girl was sick he did her while she was asleep then atracted syphilis
Damn that sucks bro...but no wonder they call you da ill'est
NO STARS ok thats just dumb
In the future check for signs of std's,sluts, cheaters and transys
Your girl wasnt a chick...her fuckin name was ANDY
NO STARS not funny this is a bad gay joke
ingnorance is bliss till you end up in the hospital for the shit
he peed in a cup for a std test...he got his name from his piss
NO STARS more parentheticals, and the std jokes are overplayed at this point
That shits just tragic and to top it off your whole rep is destroyed
Fuckin a dude, getting a std…wat else can your dignity avoid
NO STARS this line is a summary of the rest, and the rest was wak lol
this was even worse
TOTALS
da- 3stars/6bars= 0.500 (D-)
an- 1star/5bars= 0.200 (F)
VOTE? da illest
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The glass isn't half empty, it's one third full...
but I wouldn't drink that anyway, it's mostly backwash.
ps. please hit my battle in my sig and return the favor, thanks
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The glass isn't half empty, it's one third full...
but I wouldn't drink that anyway, it's mostly backwash.
uppin.............................................
niggaz get down 4 my thang im killin those bitch nigga bustas smoke bud wit my hustlaz,eazy- e made me a thugsta,im creepin n comin 2 blow out yo fuckin brainz but it aint no thang a 12-gauge 2 yo tempole just 2 remind u guyz who's da muthafukin rebel. when i creep around yo hood u those buck shots, they go bang........ im alwayz in da mood 2 slang, i creep and i cameits hard being stuck in dis game but im only in it 4 da fame
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dis wat happens 2 bitch niggaz like u
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I gots ta vote anomaly on this one....was feelin his verse more he was more personal wit clownin homies name and all........had better flow too ......
thanx alot...uppin for some more votes
Both verses had good punches
structure was alright and shit
Anomaly tried to much on personals
that was a no no don't do that you will lose
just cuz his names Da Illest don't mean he has all
these diseases you use that through ya whole flow
but overall both were good
V/Da Illest one love man
return the favor on DJB vs. ASSAZIN peace be still.
ok check this.. da illest i felt like your shit was kind of basic.. you aint really come with anything good or anything i havent seen before your lines were ordinary, like the pencil sharpener line.. next time try using some personals against your opponent and use some disses instead of physical lines like ill shoot you up
also anomaly i felt came with the beeter verse because his lines were directed sharply at his opponent.. it was all personals and what made it funny is that he turned it into a story type verse
vote- anomaly
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every rapper has a bandwagon well lets hop on yours
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Da Illest had more of what the internals are about...
Metas, wordplay...shit like that.
Anomoly came straight forward, no finesse, mostly statements and false personals.
Illest needs to stop propping himself though...
He's like "praise myself, diss opponenet, praise myself, diss opponent"...
You'd be more effective if you dissed all the way through and left yourself outta it for the most part.
Better all around...Illest
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