all right i don't seem to be getting any feed back from posts here but here goes another one.
A friend of mine recently committed suicide. This is about that and how it goes on so often,
but still you never hear about it and most of the time people just try and ignor it. Kinda
makes me sick so i wrote this to get it off my chest. Tell me what you think.
This girls on her own, feelin naked and alone,
every day she returns to an unforgiving broken home,
theres a new shatter, every time shes through the door
shes gettin battered, and he beats this "filthy whore"
It makes me sad to see, that he could be so angry,
ventin on a girl like she, no wonder shes unhappy,
every moning she wakes just to wish that she hadn't
her mother never bakes, except chems that go stagnant,
drugs bein cooked in the room downstairs,
as she sits and stares while the bleaknes off her life glares.
so strongly in her face she can't escape its grasp,
she thinks she's a disgrace,her next breath could be her last
Hopeless depression has a grasp thats unrelenting
deaths an obsession which she can't be forgetting,
its upsetting to me to see her be, so unhappy,
can't seem to cheer her up no matter how tactfully,
my jokes are placed,the expression on her face
just seems to erace, any chance to embrace.
her elegent form its somethin i wish i had,
and i begin to mourn, why does she have it so damn bad.
this girls troubled, you know she's lost in her sadness
her pains are doubled, lost in an ocean of madness
its such a shame shes got a ticket to ride ride,
the depression train, one destination, suicide.
she took her life, last night with a rope,
head was filled with strife, abandoned of hope,
still our nation chokes, on the notion that we did this,
ignorance,and pride kept us from playing witness,
another inocent, lifes down the drain,
despite the pain act like its a game,
do the same,
don't let your worries get hte better of you
your own neighbours soon to be the beheader of you.
ignoring your crie, to ashamed to put blame
on himself when you die,
.... did he even know your name?
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