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    Week 18: poetic justice vs wise mynd

    due: wed
    Vote ends: saturday morning

    topic: A phone call away
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    Topic: A Phone Call Away

    Autonomy

    Bloody fists blur in front of her face, in all directions
    She can’t even feel the pain anymore, lost all detection
    A broken nose, a cracked jaw, he performs twisted perfection
    He moves with corruption, jostles unjustly, should be sectioned
    Inserting his pain into his wife like festering infections
    And she won’t mention these happenings even to her friends
    Last week she tripped on the pavement and fell down the stairs
    Four times, her scars are cavernous; they occur in dire pairs
    --- One wounds her body, the other mutilates her prayers
    Forever no more, sitting patiently in the hospital chair
    Bleeding all over the floor, waiting for gentle love and care
    It just aint there…. And this life, well it just aint fair
    Just aint right for a woman to have to just grin and bear it
    To have to wash blood out her hair and blend it with hairclips
    And spare me this shit… “he had a bad childhood”
    I’d love to kill all woman beaters, and if I could, I would
    My own friend got beat half to death while I stood
    On the sidelines wishing that monster was nothing but pyre wood
    She wouldn’t listen, couldn’t listen to my begging Please
    Got on my knees, said he didn’t deserve you or your unborn seed
    She wouldn’t leave him although she was living in agony
    A claim to love, a love so cold that it would freeze
    Hearts, minds, punctured souls and bodies..
    ‘Please no more, do it for yourself and not for me’
    I dialed for you constantly but you wouldn’t give a testimony
    Only you can call to authority, for peace, for you to be free
    I can’t help you if won’t help yourself, trust and know me
    It’s only A Phone Call Away, reclaim your autonomy...

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    ^Wins. Closed.
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    ^yup.

    Poetic Justice wins.

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