10 lines...
No crew votes...
No biting..
No fanny bashing..
Lets do this ...
Check in mayn..
Peace
One
10 lines...
No crew votes...
No biting..
No fanny bashing..
Lets do this ...
Check in mayn..
Peace
One
In...
good luck
Fuck this herb...Talk is cheap?..lol..
The Ultimate Weapon?, Sorry queer...But ya rhymes got me laughin often..
Closest ya come to rockin mics is takin orders at Baskin Robins!..
I'll put my enormous cock in Pandoras Box to inject the Evil..
Feel the venom.. then jerk of at ya crew and infect ya people..
*Osirus just Murked my ass*.. I'll make ya sig spell..
Make ya see The Big Picture so you catch a Big L..
Over rated as fawk!..and to the voters ya balls-is-a-ride..
Auditioned for a gay porn but they said you was over qualified..
So fuck your nines and shotguns, rhymes you ain't got none..
Aces's dope lines are missing like dealers' when cops come..
Childs play..
Peace
One
Check it...
This kid’s got the name of a God, but the mind of a donkey
You winnin is like tryin to open a lock with the wrong key
You monkey, couldn’t steal a vote if it were among thieves
Kid cant pierce dope wit a verse written wit pronged teeth
Coming with personals that are more fake than tit implants
The only way you’d win this is if I you had my assistance
This kids convinced that he’ll win, must not be hearin’ this
Your punches and style have grown as old as those pyramids (sig)
Heres props for your confidence, but like I said talk is cheap
It will take you more than you’ll live for you to walk like me
Weak opener.. wack way to startOriginally Posted by Osirus
and the bolding was just herbish!
Your verse was wack..
it was to herbish...
Your punches were weak
Once again... the bolding is herbish
and the concept you was going at..
... was just useless, not even direct
Elevate plz.. you need it
Decent opener.. made me laugh a bit
it showed wittiness.. along with a few other parts of your verse
Your punches seemed to be a bit more direct, and harder hitting
^Decent personl.. coulda been a bit harder hitting
Overall.. i say Ace got this
he came off more witty
and had harder hitting punches
V/Ace of Aces
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thanx for voting. good battle. uppin.
The Ultimate Weapon?, Sorry queer...But ya rhymes got me laughin often..
Closest ya come to rockin mics is takin orders at Baskin Robins!..
I'll put my enormous cock in Pandoras Box to inject the Evil..
Feel the venom.. then jerk of at ya crew and infect ya people..
*Osirus just Murked my ass*.. I'll make ya sig spell..
Make ya see The Big Picture so you catch a Big L..
Over rated as fawk!..and to the voters ya balls-is-a-ride..
Auditioned for a gay porn but they said you was over qualified..
So fuck your nines and shotguns, rhymes you ain't got none..
Aces's dope lines are missing like dealers' when cops come..
Ace takes this easy....Osirus, you came w/ a weak verse....
both your punches and personals, just didn't hit....and lacked
any real creatvity or wit...try being more direct, and dig
deeper as far as creatvity, your verse was too basic...use
more wit...work on everything...Ace...not bad....some decent
punches, that hit alot harder and showed more creativity...
also a good personal w/ the pyramid line...wasnt fellin' the
closer, but the opener was pretty good....overall better
in every aspect...
v/ Ace
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peace
uppin this for sum votes. drop a link.
we'll vote in return. thanx.
Good battle, an obvious winner, but I enjoyed reading both spits
Os- Weak opener and dont bold man. your one personal was the weak opener. the rest was ok, but nothing extravagant. punches didnt hit real hard, but i liked the over qualified line. structure was ok, ryhme was ok, metas were ok, just need to elevate them a little.
Ace- was really feelin the structure, flowed real nice. rhyme was real good also, no elementary rhymes, punches hit ok, nutin hit real hard, but still better than Os. Loved the pyramids line, u had good personals. good battle
structure- ace
rhyme - ace
metas - tie
personals - ace
punches - ace
v-ace
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this is such a fucking joke......
how can you people vote ace, other than ball riding....
for christ'sake.....the personals...the punches killed him....
The Ultimate Weapon?, Sorry queer...But ya rhymes got me laughin often..
Closest ya come to rockin mics is takin orders at Baskin Robins!..
yes...that's true...he's told me before...
Over rated as fawk!..and to the voters ya balls-is-a-ride..
Auditioned for a gay porn but they said you was over qualified..
sex diss yes.....but twisted an original as fuk....
now your gonna compare that to this.....
You monkey, couldn’t steal a vote if it were among thieves
Kid cant pierce dope wit a verse written wit pronged teeth
it ryhmes...but thats about it..big deal...
this kinda shit pisses me off.....
Osirus won this clearly....it's obviouse he's some one else....
but people see...."flyweight" and just count him right out....
what the fuk...seriously...
and this....
Your verse was wack..
it was to herbish...
Your punches were weak
and
Ace takes this easy....Osirus, you came w/ a weak verse....
its just complete bullshit....
Illunatic....I'm a lil disapointed in you.....
vote- Osirus pc-1
^haha. still don't know wut a true punch is do you. elevate.
thanx for voting.
uppin.
osirus- no true punches...doesnt have a real gud opener ....verse was kinda weak, structure was lacking a lil bit...n yah were givin yahself props....wat is that?...(jus a lil sugestion, don do that shyt in a battle)..elevate
ace- yah verse wasnt tha best ive eva seen but i came off harder and it had better punches...and personals...(gives sum1 else props instead of yah self)....
osirus- 4/10
ace- 7/10
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uppin to finish.
Osirus-
The Ultimate Weapon?, Sorry queer...But ya rhymes got me laughin often..
Closest ya come to rockin mics is takin orders at Baskin Robins!..
Nice open..woulda focused on dissing the weapon quote a little more directly but not bad
I'll put my enormous cock in Pandoras Box to inject the Evil..
Feel the venom.. then jerk of at ya crew and infect ya people..
This was mad creative and witty.. nice
*Osirus just Murked my ass*.. I'll make ya sig spell..
Make ya see The Big Picture so you catch a Big L..
Eh..started ok, finished rather weak..
Over rated as fawk!..and to the voters ya balls-is-a-ride..
Auditioned for a gay porn but they said you was over qualified..
lol, this got a laugh..even though sex jokes are played over, this was nice
So fuck your nines and shotguns, rhymes you ain't got none..
Aces's dope lines are missing like dealers' when cops come..
Closed weak man..tryin make your closer dope, its the last thing people see
*****
Ace of Aces-
This kid’s got the name of a God, but the mind of a donkey
You winnin is like tryin to open a lock with the wrong key
Eh..ok i guess..nothing really stands out..
You monkey, couldn’t steal a vote if it were among thieves
Kid cant pierce dope wit a verse written wit pronged teeth
Good play on words, ok bar..
Coming with personals that are more fake than tit implants
The only way you’d win this is if I you had my assistance
Might of had somethin going, but ened kinda wack..
This kids convinced that he’ll win, must not be hearin’ this
Your punches and style have grown as old as those pyramids (sig)
Lol, best bar in your verse, and finally a personal..
Heres props for your confidence, but like I said talk is cheap
It will take you more than you’ll live for you to walk like me
Ouch..weak closer in my opinion..seems like you rushed it..
Umm, overall, it seemed like Ace underestimated his opponent here..Osirus just came harder and more creative..less filler basically. My vote goes to Osirus for a better verse overall..this is the weakest I've seen ya come Ace, no hate at all..peace out to both...
Vote / Osirus
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