Osirus V-S God....Who is the REAL God??..

[Osirus]

10-20 Lines..
Verses Due whenever..

No Biting..
No Crew Votes..
No River Dancing..

Peace
-1-

[God.]

Checkin' in... This is gonna be a good one...

[Osirus]

God?..Wheres God when you need him!!?....lmao..listen..

I'll kill your father, but somehow you still act so bastardly..
I bet you're son's doper than you, man, you're Master P!..
In fact...it’s a minefield battlin me, so land with caution..
And it's funny...how your records turn ugly when I handsome losses..
Watch me reveal Faults with Lines causing Profound Shaking..
Your fat ass walking is the only thing that’ll be Ground Breaking..
Didn't think anything was worse, than your shit in the league..
Then i read your gay ass open mics, and I laughed till I peed..
God's rhymes are futile..dwindle his mental down to scruples..
He's just pissed I didn't vote for him cause he seeks my approval..
God??..lol...you prey to me..you were born scared and often shook...
Got no future in hip hop just stop and continue collecting comic books!!...

Thats 12 pussy boy...

Peace
One

[God.]

I know there's no feeding, but I never did an open mic...
Aight, check it...
Osirus, so shit, I guess I'm battlin' another wannabe me
But the only difference is
is that I'm the one who will be legendary
I feel you though, I know you wanna put up a fight
But how you expect me to take ya seriously
When you ain't spell ur god's name right?
I'm the better freestyler, dawg, u gotta admit
Cause when I asked u how bad u lost u said:

I would've bit my shit!

I know you want this off the record, but this is key
Cause when I asked for a prediction here, u said:

you could probally murk me

Little boy got a couple of wins and thinks he's God
But the difference between u and me is,
I don't wannabe RB's first gay ass mod!
Seriously, this dude's a fag, and I think God would know
Cause when I told his ass to check in, he said:

Im here twinkle toes...

This is a true merkin', God vs. god,yo
You can falsely represent me
But ur still gonna be a speck under my pinky toe
This battle's over, I'm sendin' this god back to da underland
And when you have nightmares about this battle
Don't get it twisted, I'm a God and ur just a little man
Later

[Osirus]

lmao..

why put fake quotes in there?? lol...

anyways.....good battle god..
and my names spelt osirus, cause osiris is fawkin taken lol..

Uppin this for votes...
hit this up leave a link and the gods will hit u back..

Peace
-1-

[R. Frost]

I'll kill your father, but somehow you still act so bastardly..
I bet you're son's doper than you, man, you're Master P!..

^1st line nice punch...ok next..nothin special..opener

In fact...it’s a minefield battlin me, so land with caution..
And it's funny...how your records turn ugly when I handsome losses..

not much of a punch...but flow..was good

Watch me reveal Faults with Lines causing Profound Shaking..
Your fat ass walking is the only thing that’ll be Ground Breaking..

nice vocab..and flow..ok punch at end..but iffy

Didn't think anything was worse, than your shit in the league..
Then i read your gay ass open mics, and I laughed till I peed..

^my favorite bar of ur whole pec...good punch..and funny 2..lol

God's rhymes are futile..dwindle his mental down to scruples..
He's just pissed I didn't vote for him cause he seeks my approval..

VOCAB..and flow strong again...good sorta personal at the end..

God??..lol...you prey to me..you were born scared and often shook...
Got no future in hip hop just stop and continue collecting comic books!!...

^^o punch..good use of his name...


PUNCHES..7
FLOW..8
WORDPLAY...8
VOCAB..8
PERSONALS..6
STRUCTURE..7
OVERALL...44...GOOD VERSE..LACKED SOME THINGS..BUT GOOD


Osirus, so shit, I guess I'm battlin' another wannabe me
But the only difference is
is that I'm the one who will be legendary

^^not much of a punch..bad opener

I feel you though, I know you wanna put up a fight
But how you expect me to take ya seriously
When you ain't spell ur god's name right?

^^^ok personal..but u didnt rhyme in both..i dont kno confuzing

I'm the better freestyler, dawg, u gotta admit
Cause when I asked u how bad u lost u said:
Quote:
Originally Posted by Osirus
I would've bit my shit!

^^um...made ur flow choppy by makin a quote that rhyme'd in ur piece

I know you want this off the record, but this is key
Cause when I asked for a prediction here, u said:
Quote:
Originally Posted by Osirus
you could probally murk me

..again punch ok..but choppy cuz of the quote thing...ok

Little boy got a couple of wins and thinks he's God
But the difference between u and me is,
I don't wannabe RB's first gay ass mod!

..not much of a punch..ur not rlly punching at all..ur just comparing u 2 him..

Seriously, this dude's a fag, and I think God would know
Cause when I told his ass to check in, he said:
Quote:
Originally Posted by Osirus
Im here twinkle toes...

even without the quote..this bar was wack..just NO..

This is a true merkin', God vs. god,yo
You can falsely represent me
But ur still gonna be a speck under my pinky toe
This battle's over, I'm sendin' this god back to da underland

^^some of it didnt even rhyme...ok u barely threw a punch...i d k

And when you have nightmares about this battle
Don't get it twisted, I'm a God and ur just a little man

not a good way 2 end it..but ok bar..


PUNCHES..5 ...u barely threw ne at all...
FLOW..5 > the quote thing..works for some ppl..not for you...choppy
WORDPLAY...6
VOCAB..6
PERSONALS..5 ..not many ..if ne
STRUCTURE..5..ur structure was everywhere..i couldnt follow it...
OVERALL... 32 ...your style was 2 hard 2 read..so all ur shit just didnt fit makin it really weak..thats my 2 cents..NO HATE..just how i seen it..


VOTE...OSIRUS

good luck 2 both..

pec

[God.]

I've never done an open mic. Fake personal. And, I just elaborated on shit u said already with smilies. It's still all you, big man. LMAO. Good battle. Tenacity, how yuo vote on my other battle in here??? Anyway, let's go. Uppin #1

[UNDEAD.]

My Assessment

Osirus: Decent spit you had ok personals and decent punches your flow was aight got choppy in some parts but your structure was good your only let down not strong enough personals but still very good spit.
My Favourite Line:
"Didn't think anything was worse, than your shit in the league..
Then i read your gay ass open mics, and I laughed till I peed.."

God: bro wat happened ive seen half assed shit of yours betta than this personals good punches weak your flow was aight but got choppy mostly with the quotes only 1 of them worked with your text but still structure ok but this aint a song so keep it battle style overall you could of done betta.
My Favourite Line:
"Osirus, so shit, I guess I'm battlin' another wannabe me
But the only difference is
is that I'm the one who will be legendary"

Overall: this was a average battle both didnt do really good and Osirus won just because God didnt put effort but anyway keep it up and go back to ur old style God....peace

My VOTE: Osirus

[נєм]

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...8&page=1&pp=15
hit it up aswell,, and i'll poll my vote...

Osirus..
God?..Wheres God when you need him!!?....lmao..listen..
listen?its text dumbass
I'll kill your father, but somehow you still act so bastardly..
I bet you're son's doper than you, man, you're Master P!..
clever line but not as an opener
In fact...it’s a minefield battlin me, so land with caution..
And it's funny...how your records turn ugly when I handsome losses..
not a hard punch but a clever line
Watch me reveal Faults with Lines causing Profound Shaking..
Your fat ass walking is the only thing that’ll be Ground Breaking..
Good line punch was weak though
Didn't think anything was worse, than your shit in the league..
Then i read your gay ass open mics, and I laughed till I peed..
funny line good punch.. needed line to OM
God's rhymes are futile..dwindle his mental down to scruples..
He's just pissed I didn't vote for him cause he seeks my approval..
Needed re-wording
God??..lol...you prey to me..you were born scared and often shook...
Got no future in hip hop just stop and continue collecting comic books!!...
comic books? weak closer
4/10

God...
Osirus, so shit, I guess I'm battlin' another wannabe me
But the only difference is
is that I'm the one who will be legendary
OK line not as an opener though
I feel you though, I know you wanna put up a fight
But how you expect me to take ya seriously
When you ain't spell ur god's name right?
Good punch connected.true fact.
I'm the better freestyler, dawg, u gotta admit
Cause when I asked u how bad u lost u said:
I would've bit my shit!
good use of his post
I know you want this off the record, but this is key
Cause when I asked for a prediction here, u said:
you could probally murk me
bestter use of his post that hit hard
Little boy got a couple of wins and thinks he's God
But the difference between u and me is,
I don't wannabe RB's first gay ass mod!
Dude that was weak
Seriously, this dude's a fag, and I think God would know
Cause when I told his ass to check in, he said:
Im here twinkle toes...
lol good bar keepin with the gay theme
This is a true merkin', God vs. god,yo
You can falsely represent me
But ur still gonna be a speck under my pinky toe
Keepin with the flow of him sayin saying "god" nice punch
This battle's over, I'm sendin' this god back to da underland
And when you have nightmares about this battle
Don't get it twisted, I'm a God and ur just a little man
Good punch to finish him off
6/10

\/0te... God better punches and kept a smooth flow all the way through...
Hit up my battle at the top and ill come back and poll

[Super Flows]

Osirus, so shit, I guess I'm battlin' another wannabe me
But the only difference is
is that I'm the one who will be legendary
Thats ok but noy that good
I feel you though, I know you wanna put up a fight
But how you expect me to take ya seriously
When you ain't spell ur god's name right?
Haha pretty good
I'm the better freestyler, dawg, u gotta admit
Cause when I asked u how bad u lost u said:
Quote:
Originally Posted by Osirus
I would've bit my shit!
Nice thing with the quoting LOL....
I know you want this off the record, but this is key
Cause when I asked for a prediction here, u said:
Quote:
Originally Posted by Osirus
you could probally murk me
Good Flows I can feel it......Also I can understand it..
Little boy got a couple of wins and thinks he's God
But the difference between u and me is,
I don't wannabe RB's first gay ass mod!
Played........Not that good
Seriously, this dude's a fag, and I think God would know
Cause when I told his ass to check in, he said:
Quote:
Originally Posted by Osirus
Im here twinkle toes...
Nice thing with the quote again.......Too much quotes though
This is a true merkin', God vs. god,yo
You can falsely represent me
But ur still gonna be a speck under my pinky toe
Nah....wasnt deeling it this time!
This battle's over, I'm sendin' this god back to da underland
And when you have nightmares about this battle
Don't get it twisted, I'm a God and ur just a little man
Nice finishing...Not that strong as it should be
Later

I'll kill your father, but somehow you still act so bastardly..
I bet you're son's doper than you, man, you're Master P!..
Lol pretty good.Nice line
In fact...it’s a minefield battlin me, so land with caution..
And it's funny...how your records turn ugly when I handsome losses..
Not that good...I wasnt feelin it
Watch me reveal Faults with Lines causing Profound Shaking..
Your fat ass walking is the only thing that’ll be Ground Breaking..
That wasnt good either.....OK line though
Didn't think anything was worse, than your shit in the league..
Then i read your gay ass open mics, and I laughed till I peed..
Ok....Very wast understandble
God's rhymes are futile..dwindle his mental down to scruples..
He's just pissed I didn't vote for him cause he seeks my approval..
Wasnt feelin again.......Come on man!
God??..lol...you prey to me..you were born scared and often shook...
Got no future in hip hop just stop and continue collecting comic books!!...

Orsirus had the best sturcture........But God flows hit harder than your structure and verses together.I was feefeeling both of yalls but God had it by a little

But b4 I vote you have to poll in this battle and Ill vote in this.....(MAKE IT GOOD) ';...;'

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...80#post1349880

[Super Flows]

You will find my vote after someone vote in it....

[ak-mixa]

Osirus well had better punches and a good opener but could of been made better..Osirus had a better structure and it wasn't as misleading as God's...Osirus had a lot of weak lines dat didn't even make me laugh...God had a weak opener and didn't have a whole lot of punches dat were even good except like 1 or 2 to me...God's structure is what really hurt him in dis battle because peeps gonna think it don't rhyme but it really does...even if God's lines rhyme well together..I think he got merked dis time...and i'm gonna battle him one day too...ya'll keep elevating peace out.

vote= Osirus

[God.]

Uppin #2

[Darknova]

Hm.. this was REALLY close to me..

Both took diff approachs, both had different styles... both threw diff types of punches.. personally I like personals because they can't be played if you do them well.... osirus threw alot of punches & metas and they were really good too.. hmmm.. God did make a foool of you though with the quotes and personals.. so this one is probably all going to come down ot the wire, depending on the voters.. but Im'a go with God, nice personals.. and for all u idiots.. it DID flow.. structure a lil messy but it flowed in most spots..

-Can't poll-- and no hate to either of you..
I'll poll when I get 100.

Hit this up, thanks

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=125600

[ÞAÝÑîMØ]

aiight aiight


Osirus..........ya had good flow....easy to read.....but ya punches lacked that Hard hittin Luster.....You had nice creativity.....nice wordplay......wasn't feelin the whole complexity trying to throw big words that just kills the reader trying to pronouce them.......overall i would've liked to seen more multis..but ya know

Overall...7/10mics


God.....Nice flow when ya caught it.....wordplay was on point......your punched lacked alot too...but ya threw more personals which really do it for me.........vocab was aiight....you also should have thrown more multis...helps flow alot......fix ya structure............

Overall 7.5/10mics

Summary....GOD's personals and consistancy is what won it for him......he came with some nice punching but over all creative thinking......just came harder this battle...


Ones

Vote GOD