12-14 lines
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DUE WITHIN 2 HOURS
Osirus
sdizzle
12-14 lines
house rules apply
DUE WITHIN 2 HOURS
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2 hours?...lol..
aight..
see you in 35 mins...
fuck, i just wrote the verse and i hate back by mistake, FUCKING BITCH:
u lack creativty, wit, flow and structure
r u sunburned, or did i just get u flustered
this newbs weak, i could be him with all fillers ^
writeing his verses only time hes a killer
u ruin everything u touch, cuz u have no skill
ur structure pieced together like a grandmas quilt
cant believe if u show up, came in expecting to lose
hell i didn't knock his lights out, he blew his own fuse
cant believe he calls himslef a god, id be embarrassed
cuz looking at my punches only time urs are hard hit
u must confused, spitting that rookie shit with me
like an armless shopper, this victories out of ur reach
.. im back
Quick thing...
Like sexed up ugly people, I’m doin this for the Fuck of It..
Glue your verse to your face so you can be stuck to shit..
From dirty bean?..ill hurt this pheen leave ya locked in a coffin lid..
so next time you spit at me, think twice you geeky boffin bitch..
my rhymes detrimental, cuz i bring death-wit-these-pencils..
if rap's an earthquake, Diz is the fallin buildin, and Os is the epicenter!..
i don't need a gun to blast him, cuz my tongue's a mac-ten..
my right arm's a cannon, and the left one's a gatlin..
gun, son Criptic lyrics are all fags..''Can You Figure Us Out''...
I think i just did, its a brothel crew with dizzle's dick in thier mouth..
Done shouting yet? By this time you should figure nobody listened..
Write an autobiography for your wins? Who’s gonna studies fiction..
Have fun with this!..lucky its not LLL jr so the pressure isn't true..
You’re not bad, it’s just that OSIRUS is 10X better than you...
Peace..
Ill see you in the juniors kid..
100
Damn, Dizzle...
You got merked.
But, hey...O..."you geeky boffin bitch"
That was so whack it was beyond comrehension.
I almost fell outta my chair and laughed myself outta a job.
Aside from that whack punch, this was a no contest.
Dizzle showed wordplay and the basics, but that was it, just basic wordplay.
I mean, ya even threw and "armless" line, played, played, played. That's about as basic as it gets.
The "quilt" line was witty, but soft...just like a quilt!
While O came personal, complex ("earthquake/epicenter" kinda soft, but nice and creative), used multi's to aid flow and really, after the 4th line, never slowed down and steadily ripped his opponent with nice, hard shots.
O wins (I refuse to try and spell that name)
Peace
O-S-I-R-U-S
Not that hard man lol....
uppin..
Peace
100
UPPPP this mafuckkkaaaa....
I got to say this was oned sided not much to say on this battle Osirus took this all the
way and that how its going to be he took it wit the personals those was connect to
the punches and the punches left dizzle wit black eyes but that ok too and u had nice
wordplays dizzle elevate.....................................
My vote Osirus
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Sd:
U had nice verse nice wordplay all basic like the most people said. nothing reallt stood out. punches didnt really hit and played lines like armpit one. this wusnt the best verse u did cuz i have seen betta ones from ya.
Os:
Complexity was good. Creative punches and they hit hard. nice multi's the flow was aight but yea hands up u got this one locked.
V/Os
Return fav both.
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yawn almost to 500
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not one of my best battle, but uppin anyway...... almost to 500
.. im back
Up motherfucker...
leave links...
Just get this battle dealt with!!!..
This is my 4th up....
just vote up..
man this threads been up for ages...
From that kick ass opener, osirus had me on this one. I did like Sdizzle's form, flow, and the punch about disgracing the name of a god, but O's punches were for the most part stronger and he had a pretty good flow.
My vote: Osirus
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