Last edited by Penskills; March 3rd, 2004 at 08:05 PM
replied to-Echo
Deva
Katz.frost
penskills dawg...
was this a rap or 3 long paragraphs of basically meaningless amount of vocab that was strung together to make absolutly no sense at all?...
had no structure, flow was..well not there...look at other open mics, do you see them like this...no!
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Yeah work on your structure...dont put it in paragraph for because for some people it makes it harder to read and it throws off the flow, so put it line on top of line and try to keep the lines around the same length so it helps the flow out....but keep at it.
That really wasn't very good. i didn't know wot was goin on. wot was that rhyme about?
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