Quote:
My gears grind,
much like that of a clock.
Though my hands of time,
are worn to the bone.
Thoughts running wild,
like wounded prey, I try to
count my paces with precision,
this trek will end soon.
Laces tangle beneath me.
a mouth full of dirt and sand.
Standing erect seems now,
to be nothing more than a pipedream.
My sky has fallen,
carry on or burn out like the rest.
These last few stanzas are excellent I loved the topic, and tone you brought to this piece. I agree with Prof James above that the quote does seem out of place but somehow to me it works a little but it might be more effective elsewhere. This was a pretty well written piece that I enjoyed.