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I have no idea why I'm on this site. Waiting for something to download. Sigh.
I haven't heard anything from you in years, so it's nice to hear you do something different. Still syllable crunching, but I enjoyed this. There were a few times you were riding the beat in front of it, but I think that's just hpw you rap from what I remember. Joyner Lucas does it too. It's something I'm trying to get my ears used to. Wordplay and delivery is always spot on like always. Man, fuck that shit. We're not beginners, so I don't have to break down your shit. I thought this was pretty good man. Solid verse. My only complaint is the riding the beat in front, but like I said, I think that's just how you rhyme, and a personal thing for me. Shitty no one has replied to this in over a month. Post some shit on YouTube Celph.
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Originally Posted by Blackflags
Very informed breakdown, thank you. And how have you been? Nice to see you back, brother.
Audio's dead on this site.
God damn this was almost a year ago bro.Quote:
Originally Posted by Celph Taut
Too bad, rap's fun. I decided to join the site. My name's LE Attol.
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and My site's at: https://leattol.com
Pretty good rap.
Celph... I didnt know you were still at it you big headed bastage...
i know this was form last year, but yeah...i thought you were done years ago...
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ayooo... Flags... you still a douche? or you gotten over yourself since???Quote:
Originally Posted by Blackflags
hit me on Steam if you want...
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Originally Posted by Toobs
If I'm being quite honest, I literally record when i feel like it. There's no obligation inside of me to want to record unless I get the bug to.
Beat goes hard. Punches is on. I like your flow, smooth, weaves around the beat. As stated above, you've been at this for awhile. It shows in the way your rap. Hit me back!
Oh shit Celph, this is where you be at?
I just now joined this joint. I figured it was a good time to get involved with it.
Fire as always. You sound like you even upped from the last time I heard you. It's always love on my end for you bro. Let me know what's up.
I still got the feature game on smash and making a ton of new joints. You should've made this one longer but I fuck wit it tho.
Mad suprised to see you over here haha.
I don't know how to answer this question Toobs. You've been a troll and a douche far longer than I sir. You ever upgrade your calculator?Quote:
Originally Posted by Toobs
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I don't know how to answer this question Toobs. You've been a troll and a douche far longer than I sir. You ever upgrade your calculator?Quote:
Originally Posted by Toobs
I like it, you got bars and an energetic flow. I think your vocals could have been mixed better though to cut through the beat more and be cleaner and clearer. EQ could have definitely made the vocals brighter. This is over a year old right where's your new shit!!
YupQuote:
Originally Posted by Blackflags
This beat is fucking tight haha.
Man this is sick. You literally NEVER disappoint, any time I see a Celph track on these boards I get excited.
This is SO tight buddy. You just ride this crazy beat like nuts. I just wish it was longer. Whenever I heard GMO Skee for the first time I swore he reminded me of you.
Side note - I have a track with him now, we should probably do one ;)
Keep it up buddy. This was nice.
I have no idea why I'm on this site. Waiting for something to download. Sigh.
I haven't heard anything from you in years,
so it's nice to hear you do something different.
Still syllable crunching,
but I enjoyed this.
There were a few times you were riding the beat in front of it,
but I think that's just how you rap from what I remember.
Joyner Lucas does it too.
It's something I'm trying to get my ears used to.
Wordplay and delivery is always spot on like always
We're not beginners, so I don't have to break down your thing
I thought this was pretty good man.
Solid.
My only complaint is the riding the beat in front
but like I said, I think that's just how you rhyme,
and a personal thing for me.
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Originally Posted by andrewjoseph007
Thanks for the critique, brother.
Obligatory question, though: who is this, lol?
Dude, this guy literally copied and pasted Flag's comment^ LOLOLOL. Thats troll level 1000, especially since its his only post on here.
As far as the song goes, I was doing my white man wiggle on the couch the whole time. Obviously flow and cadence on point the whole time, i remember really liking this a couple years ago when you posted it. Do you hate writing hooks? Or just love 1:30 min freeverses? haha. Dont get me wrong, fucking dope as shit. But I wonder why you didnt just split the verse into two and break it up with a few catchy hooks, all of a sudden you have a complete song instead of a million short freeverses. Hope you're well brother. If you're still recording I've got a couple tracks i think you'd be money on if you wanna finish up a full song :)
EDIT: If you reply here I probably wont see it for another 2 years, I just stopped by to see what my old stupid battle record was and if i still remembered my password lol.
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Originally Posted by Mr. Write
Lol. I don't know how I didn't notice that. But anyways, thanks for the critique! I'm taking a little break from recording (Haven't really had time, nor a place to record music for a year or two) but shit man, it's good to see one of the old vets on this site, for once! This site been dead as fuck, I only come here as refuge from your typical channels of social media (FB, Insta, etc). I'll check you on there, lol.
Love the bird/elephant horn. I got nothing else for you.
Beat comes in hot. You're a lot better than the last time I heard you! Smooth drop for sure. I see it's a couple years old but this is fire. knocks pretty hard. Dug the flow most definitely. Some sweet bars in there. Just bumped again. The dogs line, stop signs, scorpion.. felt like you were mad comfortable on this beat. Definitely gotta bump more of your stuff and catch up. Hope you been well bro!!